This was really good. I like how you portrayed the sisters that were there. They seemed in character and the relationship between them was sweet. The situation was also very believable. I really liked it.

This is my number #1 favorite fanfic ever!

I'll admit, I thought this was a cute story. Very well written, seems like something that could happen within this family

OMG! I'm adding this onto my favorites list!

Awww precious 3

Quite a story here!

Keep up the great writing!

I absolutely loved this. It's a simple story, but that's kinda what makes it so beautiful. Things like this happen in families. Especially with large families where the kids are used to taking on a lot of responsibilities as well. I should know, because I have a large family.

I loved the way you wrote both Lucy and Luna. Lucy's inexperience was perfectly portrayed. And it's not very often that we get to see Luna take on the role of the responsible older kid, but she handled it beautifully. I just loved reading every word of this story.

A very nice Luna and Lucy story, I have only read one other story of those two together. Dr. Luna really took charge! Love it!

Well lucy is more patient than I would be

soo cute and lucys adorable

Excellent, was browsing for a story like this for quite a while, and this delivered nicely.
best thing about Loud House is the genuine feeling sibling relationships and you NAILED that aspect.

This was an awsome story! Even though it was serious and kinda dramatic it was really good and I like protective! Older sisters. Roxy

Now that, that is a way to perfectly end a story. A slightly altered version of the start, but with an ending sentence that satisfies the reader but also leaves a hint or impression of a possible sequel that doesn't have to be fulfilled by the author. I'm favoriting this, its also really captures what splits the younger siblings from the older ones, but in a more light manner.

Awesome. I love the seriousness of this story. By pure accident, a little kid being left home alone in the middle of the night WITH A BABY is a very real problem, and the fact that it was Lucy made it very interesting. She wasn't the "spooky Goth" who appears out of nowhere; she's an 8-year-old girl who just wanted to go back to sleep.

Great job :)