This was great. I love how you told this story from an outsider's POV. That made it much better than if it had been told from the POV of a Straw Hat.

Yeah! Another story written from an outside perspective! I really liked this one...that poor marine making sense of everything was great. I kinda feel bad for the guy though. Dealing with Luffy and company? Yeah, he better hope for reassignment.

Anyway, fantastic work! Love it!

lol and nothing else x"D the poor sob

oh god a south blue marine? poor guy.

It would be great to hear what the other marines say when he tells them of his time there, marines who know Luffy, like Garp, Coby, Smoker,... nad some who do not know him. That would be so funny

That poor marine is going to need serious therapy... Can he be sent to Garp?

This is fantastic.

Please write more stories like this!

Dear heavens, this is giving me IDEAS...

never read a one piece fanfic like this but i loved the story...gonna look for more stories like these now lol

New World Pirates were insane. Sorry, Marine, but this type of crazy is pretty much exclusive to the Straw Hats.

I could so see this happening

is there going to be a sequel ?

Gotta love outsider PoV. No one's gonna believe the poor guy's report when he's freed, but maybe he could publish it and get rich instead?

This is great. I would love a sequel where the Strawhats turn the poor Marine over and he has to make a report. I wonder if Chopper's bounty would finally go up, or would the Marines just think that the Strawhats had driven the man insane.