Reviews for Slow Dancing in a Dark Room
Eileen Prince Malfoy chapter 24 . 8/30
I’m truly happy that I found this fanfic, I experienced so much emotions while reading this (in one day uwu) I laughed, I smiled, I felt their love, I cried and mourned. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece I’m forever grateful to had read this and felt a love I have never felt in real life towards someone but could feel in the story you told of this beautiful pair.
Ami chapter 18 . 8/7
This is one of the best and most beautifully written fanfic I have ever read. I even bookmarked it. I wasn't such a huge byaichi fan but one night I just thought about how amazing their dynamic would be and found your fanfic! And you are so perfect in putting their characters together it's honestly way too impressive for me. It seems REAL as if chp 686 never happened and ByaIchi is canon (as it should've).
Empressmarcy chapter 24 . 1/16
I'm not crying, whatever do you mean?
sherryfanfic1999 chapter 24 . 11/22/2019
I don't know about others, but the fact that their first child was not of Byakuya and himself was kind of a slap in the face. Shion could have easily been their second. But life can be shity to you at times. I think Renji is laughing at Ichigo expense. GOT' CHA!
Ichigo is so strong. I would have had to take a moment to try and understand why Kisuke would do such a thing knowing Ichigo loves Byakuya so. It's hard, but I'm only human.
Still enjoyed, so that was besides the point. Love is perfect and unperfect, confusing and understanding. Love is a test. Ichigo passed.
582Raven chapter 24 . 11/21/2019
Definitely an addition to me favorites:) very very good story.
582Raven chapter 22 . 11/20/2019
Still love this thing, but I need to say one thing that has been annoying me. Here's some constructive criticism, not meant to be insulting at all.
You have been consistently using contractions like "kind've" and "sort've" instead of "kind of" and "sort of" and that's not right. If you want to show a more relaxed slang type dialect you should replace these with "kinda" and "sorta". The contractions that your are using make me think of "kind have" and "sort have" which really just doesn't work in the sentences.
582Raven chapter 8 . 11/19/2019
Love the story, but I hate the trope where he's ordered around by clan elders regarding crap like this. Hate. It.
LotusThorn chapter 24 . 8/5/2018
Oh my gawd! I am in love. I dont know if you read these reviews anymore, but let me just say my piece.
You are a beautiful writer, and I am so happy that I took the time to read this story. It was an amazing masterpiece of overcoming inner turmoil, lost, and ultimately the love that can grow from both. I was on this emotional roller coaster ride, laughing, wanting to cry, and everything in between from the first chapter to the last. Truly one of the best well written stories I have read on this site. Bravo!
SesshomaruFreak chapter 3 . 6/15/2018
Awww that broke my heart. Poor Renji left him a beautiful message.
*in tears cause she ships RenBya*
Seth's Kiss chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
I LOVE this story ! Great work !
IdolDigidestined chapter 24 . 4/21/2018
So I saw this. I’ve read this before but idk if I reviewed any of it...

So the ending felt really fluffy yet left me sad because RENJI. However it’s a good ending. Couldn’t have asked for a better ending.

However, on the note of your translations. Otosan is PERFECTLY OK. That means father. Chichi also means father. Yeah it’s a lot of context shenanigans. However as a person who doesn’t speak Japanese fluently I can say it doesn’t matter in the long run.

It’s not perfect. However Japanese is one of the hardest languages to learn. I have friends in japan who I speak to in Japanese. Yet I’m no where near fluent.

Don’t worry. It doesn’t break immersion that much. If at all for the standard NA reader.
Jazzybella chapter 24 . 11/22/2017
I loved this. I just came back to the fandom and this was the first story I picked up. You are such a damned good writer. You write these two so well it should be cannon. How the two danced around each other before getting it together. Can't wait for more and maybe a Bya/Ichi baby?
xOphiuchusx chapter 24 . 11/17/2017
Omg. I love it so much!
GrimmKat chapter 4 . 9/22/2017
OMG YOU ARE KILLING ME IN THE SWEETEST OF WAYS
I don't know if you'll ever read this comment but shit, this story is just so good. I will type out an elaborate review once I finish it but I'm sure as hell are gonna comment on every damn chapter I read from now on.
I love it. And I'm still sobbing. But it's all good.
GrimmKat chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
jesus fucking christ every time when I think ok it's gonna be ok, things will get better for everyone now, you just fucking smash me over the head with a massive angst-hammer again. I'm ugly sobbing here because of your writing. God I love it. Thank you.
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