Please use spell check. A reader should not have to stop and figure out what you are meaning to say. Even the name of your protagonist is spelt wrongly.

Please clean up your writing , check for the basics before you send it out to the world. Any enjoyment of storyline is hampered by careless usage of words that causes the reader to stop and search for clarity.

He's awake at last.
Hooray! :)

Mr. Butler's reassuring sixth sense. :)

Oh lovely! I've enjoyed this story immensely, and soo glad he's A-okay...I love these two sleuth's and Jack's parents, of course Jane. I'm very eager to know the continuation. Thank you kindly!

Excellent! It's getting better and better and you never disappoint. It's like a warm Hug...thank you, Heidi for sharing and updating. You're awesome!

Loving it!

Thank you for updating this story. I really enjoyed this last story and i am so looking forward to the next installment. I hope that nasty Rosie Sanderson gets what she deserves...life in prison!

Love the musings of Phryne. The scene where Jack's parents visited was poignant. His parents are lovely and I'm glad they met Phryne. This chapter was pitch perfect. Please update when you can. Good luck to you!

You did a wonderful job writing this. You captured all the feels. I love Jack's parents already.
You have to do what you have to do. I appreciate you for updating, but real life is more important. I'm curious to see what's next whenever it's possible. I'll patiently wait. Thank you.

I am so glad you returned to your story. It is an amazing story. I hoped that you would started this chapter with the reaction of Rosie and her arrest. But mayby you could tell it as a story Phryne is going to tell Jack after he wakes up. Thanks for the update and I hope to see a new one soon

Thank you so much for updating! :) This is great

Is there going to be more to this story? It's great thus far, and I hope there's more. Please update soon

Never did like Rosie. Are you going to update? Pretty please!

I didn't guess it was Rosie! :0