Reviews for Off Autopilot |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope with the new movie coming out soon, you'll return to this! I love where its headed and it written beautifully! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite enjoyable, keep up the hard work |
![]() ![]() There really wasn’t much reylo in the fix |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im totally liking the story so far but I Cant wait for the reylo to get amped up. Please update! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story. It's interesting but Rey and Kylo seem slightly out of character. I get that Kylo is supposed to be undercover for the First Order but it's kinda obvious and the fact that you've given Rey this unforgivable hatred that she voices seems out of character as well. And whippings for a prisoner on SW seems so mundane for this type of universe. You're in outer space, there is literally no limit to the amount of punishments one could go through. Plot is good. Characters need work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving the Damereyness going on here, and very much appreciate the explicit consent. Yay, consent! Good on you, Poe. Curious to see what's gonna happen with Kylo here. We knooowww what he's feeling, but does he? I'll admit that Rey's lineage seems a bit Mary-Sueish here, but given that this is from before we really knew, it gets points for creativity. Certainly dunno how Palpatine handled that one, though. Can't wait to see the next chapter! Gotta get me some of that Kylo repressed jealousy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the triangle forming! Slow burn is so worth the wait. Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing can't wait for more, I just found this story and I love damerey so much! please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is so hard to find a Damerey pairing, much less something so beautiful! I squealed for sure and I just love your writing style. I also enjoyed how you portrayed the characters so well, I could picture Rey in my head perfectly. And how sweet, supportive, and pure Poe seems is just heart-melting. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() When will u write again |
![]() ![]() ![]() You perfectly captured everyone's personalities. A favorite moment for me in this chapter was how sweet and respectful Poe was, asking Rey to show him where to touch her. If only all of us could be that lucky, to have that kind of respectful partner in our lives. What color(s) do you have planned for the blades on Rey's lightsaber-staff? A YT video I saw recently said yellow was the color of Jedi sentinels, and it said Rey matched many of the traits those types of people carried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was just terrific and oh so hot. Wonderful job and I look forward to more. :) BRAVO! xo Shani :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting trip to the past in this chapter. Great job and I look forward to more. :) xo Shani |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost feel sorry for Kylo here. :( Looking forward to more. Well done! xo Shani |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... loved the moments with Rey and Poe. They are so cute! :) Looking forward to more. xo Shani |