Wow... I love female Jaden. But love the reconciliation that goes on here. Plus the addictive qualities of the Dark Side.

Oh after that cliff hanger you have to continue it!
I'd love to see rescue, or escape, as well as reconciliation or maybe more between Jaden and Rosh.
Nice to see you're still writing this. :-)

Nice slice-of-life. Makes the reader want more. I'd love to hear their next conversation :)

Interesting. What canon is this story based on?

Hello!
Thanks for the update! I especially liked the first bit, swinging between Rosh's emotions and thoughts of Jaden, to Jaden's emotions and thoughts of Rosh. Very in character for them both. Just a minor thing - it's a bit easier to know who is speaking if you do a paragraph break when a new person speaks. If that makes sense :)
And awww warm fluffies at the end :) It's been a very long time since I played Academy (one of my fav SW games though), but I really disliked Rosh. So your Chapter 2 & 3 are a nice turnaround in that I actually want him to make up with Jaden. I really didn't in the game LOL, I think it's the only SW game I went DS on first play through!

Heya,
Nice to read a fic about Academy. It's been a long time since I played it lol. Rosh is an annoying twit in the game which makes him a difficult character to write and have readers feel empathy for, but you managed that. It would be interesting if you have any more fics on him :-)