This is a great short. Dentists are very practical and get the job done.

a melancholy smile - a melancholic smile

I really like your Dan; much the same advice my dad gave to my fatherless boyfriend.
By the way, forgot to mention in the previous chapter - Mundungus under wheelbarrow: was that a clever reference to the old saw 'as drunk as a wheelbarrow'?

I hope this goes further ...

what do you mean, whoever heard of a flour explosion? any finely particulated matter can explode, it's why mills were always made with wooden cogs not metal ones to prevent the flour exploding.

I LIKE your Dan Granger - concerned without being heavy-handed, the way dads are supposed to be

Nice one.

xxxxx Kudos xxxxx : )

I love this!

Spontaneous combustion of Durzkaban, eh? Almost as if someone was harbouring a well-sharpened grudge. Thanks for sharing with us, Emma throwing Dan off the sled to the wolfpack was lovely, left one to imagine the ripping teeth.

excellent update

Oh wow. Update soon.

Hermione's accidental magic before she was identified as a witch was funny.
Yum! at the sound of Hermione's brand new engagement ring.
"self-explanatory" and "strong-willed" should be hyphenated.

Great story! Love this take on meeting the parents! Looking forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!

Wow...only four years between updates...does this mean I'll be retired when this story is finished? :P

Interesting start hope to see more from you soon.

I love it! Thanks for the new chapter!