Incredible! Beautiful interpretation of John's grief.

Such a perfect description of John and his persona, how he would deal with grief. Always stoic, but battling within. Gorgeous.

As beautiful as ever. I know that feeling of going to the water when the spirit is low, and finding oneself refreshed.

Wow. Your word choice is so natural and precise this is practically poetry. Genius character analysis combined with gorgeous writing. You should frame this.

This is amazing! :D Very well written and very descriptive! I love how you portrayed John. 3

Loved it then and now.

This is incredibly, powerfully beautiful. You are a poet. Thank you for sharing this. You have captured our hero perfectly, and it is a pleasure to read.

Absolutely beautiful. I'm amazed what you can do even in a short segment. Your writing is incredibly descriptive and makes for some lovely one shots. Excellent work and keep it up. :)