Reviews for Blur
Child of Dreams chapter 4 . 3/25/2017
It's Mungo's, not Mungus.
Sue chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Okay, I'm sorry but this needs to be said. Epilogue is AFTER the story. Prologue is BEFORE the story.
crimson hearts chapter 5 . 2/24/2016
omg i really liked what i read and i cant wait to read about her time in arda. will she still look the same and have magic. i hope so.
Cc chapter 5 . 2/15/2016
This is a good start. It has a good reason for Thorin becoming close and trusting the love interest quickly. Then having her coming to Middle Earth in such a way with witnesses should help them both with the darrow nation.
Thorin will be different when he wakes up just because of the anticipation of seeing her again. What will his family & people think when he wakes up and says Mahal told him he is making his chosen "one" a body. And that she gave up her entire world to be with him. Who is going with Thorin to the east?
Waiting to see what the next part brings. Thank you for an interesting read.
sharkswillruledaWORLD chapter 5 . 8/25/2015
I. Absolutely. Love. This story! I can't wait for part two because seriously it's just so hoddamn good!
Katzztar chapter 3 . 6/13/2015
Re-reading this for the 3rd time and caught something I didn't notice before

"..his 'maleness' wasn't conforming to her idea"? Hmmm wonder what that means, Is he bigger or thicker than she expected? Or simply more hairy ;)
Skendo chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
Hang on ... How did they go from sleeping/Dreaming in Grimauld Place to Now? And where exactly is now? Are they both in Middle Earth?
Aeryun chapter 5 . 5/22/2015
I really like this. I look forward to the next part.
Katzztar chapter 5 . 5/10/2015
Just re-read this again and eargerly await part 2.
"Come to the East..." Wonder if Mahal meant to go to Grey Heavens where the elven ships travel between Valinor and Middle Earth. Be amusing, there's been ..what 6?...travelers from Valinor to Middle Earth -the 5 Istari and Glorfindel(well that is if we go with the idea Glorfindel of Rivenedell is same as Glorfindel of Gondolin as Tolkein seemed to aim at) so IF Lucy did travel to Grey Heavens be funny in a way... someone coming from Valinor but NOT to meet the elves, instead she's wants to meet the Darrow... one in particular.

"A body must be made..." makes me wonder if Lucy's original body would be dead in Grimmauld. IF its only her soul that travels between worlds. IF so, what of her magic , her most precious belongings, what of the Deathly Hallows?
musme chapter 5 . 5/10/2015
I like it
Stahchild chapter 5 . 5/6/2015
I am so excited for part 2. This is awesome so thank you for sharing!

Will you be posting part 2 onto this story or will it be a story of its own?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5/2015
I love it! At last, a good femHarry/Thorin fanfiction. You've got an original plot, a good writing style - not too mushy or unrealistic - and good grammar. I just hope to see the sequel soon.
Cristalelle
SH chapter 5 . 5/5/2015
Love this! Such potential for the plot and I absolutely love the understanding between Lucy and Thorin. I wonder how his family will react to how he's changed and where Lucy will end up and whether she'll be entirely herself or changed somehow. Mostly I've enjoyed Lucy and Thorin finding such peace and comfort in each other. Lovely! I hope you update again soon. :)
SpikeySugarBomb chapter 5 . 5/5/2015
Part two, or chapter two?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5/2015
Hey! This is a super-interesting idea...I love it!
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