Awesome...

Please continue!

Really like it a lot but it's a bit sad it's a one-shot... :)

Take care

Good!

I can only think of an English word to describe this: beatiful! But I mean every inch of it!
The characters are so...in character! :)
"Find strength in the discipline" I like it!

Nice!

Indeed we do, and I should know the feeling of getting none for a while. But I digress.

First off, I liked this. I'd read the 'last one' as you put it, but I hadn't had time to review. I don't get into the Mulan section that much or the Movies section in general, but I do sometimes take a little gander at what's there. I have to say I enjoyed the bit of insight into what's going in Mulan's head. Being everything her culture doesn't want her to be, I can imagine she would feel more than a little lost. But as we all know, at least those who have seen the movie, she finds herself. And I like how you portrayed it.

Is it the greatest story I've seen? I can't say that. But it was a well done piece, and one that you should certainly feel proud of.

Well done.

Oh, wow! I love it!