I am not a fan of Sherlock, but I came across your summary and thought it sounded interesting. This is great! I love the dialogue between Sherlock and Watson. I believe you have accurately portrayed how they would interact in an "off" moment. The little bit with the cats had me cracking up. These elements, along with the pop culture allusion amalgamated nicely to create a sense of humour. This is something a lot of authors find difficult.

Though spelling and grammatical errors do not bother me so much (I am accustomed to seeing them, as I have worked as both a writing consultant and teacher, and I am much more interested in encouraging people to write than I am in meticulously pointing out their every fo pah.) but I think there are a couple of spelling and mechanical errors that may be easily mended. In fact, I see one that was most likely caused by accidentally pressing a key and not noticing the mistake when editing: ptremendous.

Nicely done. Quite creative. Thanks for a good laugh

This is great! I thought the exact same thing after watching that clip.

It's a unique idea, and you wrote the scene very well:D

The point of view switch, smoothly transitions as you read, so great job on the detail! I look forward to reading more of your work;)

-SH

ah yes you just couldn't pass up reminding us of the dreaded penguin incident now could you

Omg I've seen the Sesame Street video! XD This is hilarious! And the documentary. And Penguins of Madagascar the movie. If you listen carefully, you can hear Ben saying "Pengwings" A lot. It's amusing. :)

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This is awesome and hilarious. Lol keep it up and write more soon!

I saw that Sesame Street video! Sherlock and John's reaction were hilarious!
Keep up the good work!

BAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA.

THIS IS AWESOME.

NO KIDDING THIS IS AWESOME.

And oh my the irony I just got a Pinterest account :P

I CAN'T GET OVER HOW FUNNY THIS IS RIGHT NOW.

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Heheheh... I've seen both... the Penguin one is my fav... but I love this *_*

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Naw. You're welcome...

No thanks needed though...

Keep writing!

Rousdower out_