well, this was a good story. i really wanted to complete it but heh.

I love this fanfic could plz continue it or let
Someone adopt it

WHY DO YOU DO THIS

Sounds interesting and i'm looking forward to reading it. Please post a note here so I get notification when you start to post it.

i would like a rewrite of this story

lies this is not a chapter

Decent story so far but there are a few things that are rubbing me the wrong way in it. The only mention of Harry and Lachlan being different ages is in your note in the first chapter, no other mention. I don't know about you but I ignore those to get to reading the story. Add a few mentions like the age on the cake, Harry's age in the time skip lines.
Also in your later chapters you switched Lachlan's name to Adam. Remember to keep your characters names straight.

Maybe also expand on the backstory a bit, most of the time I got lost in regard of the timeline with the time skips. Didn't help that you put quotes from Harry at an older age then he is in the chapter. You also forgot about Remus and Sirius, they are pretty important characters in the HP world, and no mention at all of them.

Overall: Decent story, needs more exploration of the Before Hogwarts time, making sure that your characters names don't change halfway through the story, and make distinctions in the story for the characters ages when a time skip happens rather then infer that everyone will understand via an authors note in the beginning of the story.

Seriously, your backstory just isn't there, for example. Why is Harry a flirtatious person? Because it makes really no sense, he's ignored by his parents, wouldn't know truly how affection is (unless someone that you forgot to mention in the MISSING BACKSTORY was teaching him). How is he doing magic at the birthday party? Wandless? if it is then how does he know it? Your backstory/Pre-Hogwarts timeframe is missing a lot of information and needs to be expanded upon.

This harry was defanitly inspired by detective conan, very cool

Please write more, this story is great.

Continue, please.
This story is cool.

Cool story

This is gold hands down, following and faving ! xD
''You shall not pass!'' might come sooner than later but with harry on the other end :P

NightingGale? The Black Cats? The Cheshire? The Unnamed. Thats all I got. I think the Slytherin should be a shrewd girl that likes money and charges people for everything. Like Viper from Katekyo hitman reborn. Would be cool if Mrs Norris Likes Harry's cat form. Like treating him like her kit or something.

lol I can't wait to see this prank. :)

Now Hogwarts will enjoy Harry's fun.