Wow. Powerful story.
Love how the story really only happened that one night, and how the past year was revealed. Elphaba thinking the situation was similar to Galinda's romance novels, and how things would be different it it actually was one.
Poor Elphaba, but I'm glad she had people to help her get through it; and all their reactions were perfect. Yes, even Frex, and I'm glad they were brought closer because of what happened.
And the way Fiyero wasn't there when 'it' happened was perfect, because Elphaba realised over time that it hadn't meant he'd deserted her. The way she blamed herself was beautiful and bittersweet and once again, perfect for her.
And to see her finally tell Fiyero, and for him to be right there for her was wonderful.

Go to your corner. Go. To. Your. Corner.
...
*shoves pencil and paper at you* And here, write some more while you're there. I'm pretty sure there are plenty of Muses in that corner to help you out.

Keep writing.

Awwww! It was pretty dark but the outcome was so bittersweet downright perfect :)

Maddy, we're ok. At least, I am. It was so sad and my Imagine Dragons wasn't exactly brightening the mood, but it was still very beautiful. Silly Fae is correct, Fiyero. I mean, I can only imagine the hell they both went through, but still...silly Fae.

I love this so much.

I did a one-shot to this song couple of years ago, but it was all angst Flinda and yours is just pure unadulterated Fiyeraba perfection.

It's good to still see some quality writing around this place. Great job!

Sorry I'm so late on reviewing this! Gosh, this was dark, but the ending was so incredibly sweet and I loved that. This was amazing, I really liked it and I feel really bad for Elphaba, but she has Fiyero, now.

And Frex being nice and supportive? I like that, too. I'm glad Frex supported her and actually cares for her. It's different and I enjoyed that.

This was overall amazing and you should not go die in a hole. I'm excited to see what you write next.

Sorry about stress at university. You can hang around. This was very well written. Angsty and fluffy. Lol

NO! Come back! Don't crawl into a hole! This was such a great one-shot! I'm sorta glad Frex was a bit supportive. If he wasn't, it would have made this entire situation worse. I really enjoyed this one-shot and I'm glad she told Fiyero and got that load off of her chest.

LOVELY JOB! :-)

*looks around at other reviewers* I guess we can keep her... for a while... under ONE condition: You are NOT allowed to stop writing! You hear us? We will hunt you down. We're authors too you know. We'll PM you sad stories where half a ship dies. We're brutal. So don't you dare stop writing! In the meantime, Totally looking forward to your next story!

Is this a one-shot? If not, please continue?

Also stay around so that I can give you an apologetic hug for being a bitch the other day.

*looks around stubbornly before sighing* fine, you can stay

I really loved this...not the terrible cruelty of rape, but I like that it's real. That even though they live in this "wonderful" land, bad things can still happen. When I type this I keep thinking about Into the Woods. But it was amazing as always. You never fail to dissapoint.

Hey I liked it! My personal opinion was it was great, and I was kinda hoping that at the end Fiyero had said "the sky's awake." That would've made my day.

DON'T GO INTO THE HOLE.
Crawl out, and write some more sweet fics instead.
I really liked this, and Last Christmas is a favourite of mine.
I'll keep an eye on you and your writing...
in a non-creepy way.

I love how this ends! Great story! A tad dark, but oz-mazing just the same!