Three chapters in and no prominent antagonist yet, or is there... (I want a new paragraph here, but I can't make one in the app, so you'll just have to imagine it) Your style is interesting and the plot intriguing, Imma keep on reading and I thank you for writing this!

I am so confused, yet exited? I think so at least, and it doesn't matter, I'm pressing the next button anyway. Thank you for writing this!

Oh, that is sinister...

Woah, that was just. Impressive. You really poured emotion and a lot of effort into this chapter mixing past, present, and future. Which is really unique in its own way. That was a nice job portraying the main cast from Start Trek 1 and Star Trek 2. Your writing style is really remarkable in this addition. Good job :)

awwww it ended it was a good read!

I loved reading this story and it was so much fun to read!

Great novel! Thank you for finishing it.

Nice story! Glad to see that Jim has decided to ... not have to *forgive* his crew, but to *trust them* as they deserve!

More, please!

I love Kev and I want to hug him so tight!. This needed to be said.

love your writing

Think you might be dragging this out too much?

I love the two flashbacks! Elizabeth is soooo cute!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Loved the chapter! I did not expect Cupcake to make an appearance but he was actually great :D

Oh dear they are in trouble but great chapter can't wait for the next please update again soon