Very, very good, I enjoyed this story as well! Keep up the good work!

Lovely ending, can't wait to read more of yours!

their relationship is now strong

Excellent concluding chapter! I enjoyed this adventure immensely!

Really good story - I think you have the Doctor and Jamie exactly right.

Ooo, marvelous chapter! Very clever!

love the scotch dialouge

Oh, I do love Jamie. He was the best of the classics in my opinion, and way better than Zoe if you ask me. (I found her annoying).
Nice job. Good voices.

I was hanging on the edge of my seat. The whole time.
Now my heart has finally slowed down.
O, good heavens.
Gracious sakes alive.
NOW WHAT?

Oy, Jamie, nooooooo!

Good story-telling; looking forward to more!

What an excellent story! I can't wait to read more.

Did you just reference "Listen"? I love that episode! Also good job writing the Weeping Angel, I jumped out of my skin when I read about it heading towards Jamie. So Jamie's even further in the past now? Can't wait to see how he gets out of this one.

Oh no. Oh no, ohno. That's the "extreme point" of every book or movie, when you know what's going to happen, but the character doesn't... *eagerly waits for the continuation* Priceless reactions.

Oooo! Looking forward to more!

As usual, you have yet to disappoint. Great chapter, and I especially love the image of the angel looming in the corner, watching them, then vanishing. I can't wait to find out more about the wisps.