Reviews for A Good Christian Home
Nikoleh Rodrigue chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
bro, i gotta say amazin'!its not like the crap the proudironhousewife wrote or whatever
HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 5 . 2/3/2018
Oh My LORD VOLDEMORT! Now THIS is a version of him I could respect...& envy 'cause I would SO LOVE to take over the world unifying all their religions and using it against them! And he has means of living longer than Methuselah to solidify his reputation as being beyond an ordinary man...much respect to that...although not so much for the cannibalism if its horcruxes. Can you make an original story with this idea; following the quest of one into becoming a God?
HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 2 . 2/3/2018
Wow, incredible, and so emotionally on-point. You have a talent that I'm grateful to have experienced
Painting w Words chapter 4 . 10/18/2017
nooooOOooOoO oh my gooood you can't just do this to meee

this is really good and im shook how dare u this is the best thing ive ever read
Painting w Words chapter 2 . 10/18/2017
oh wow i like the name-dropping Creation Adventure Team
Painting w Words chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
i saw the author's note and was so scared of what this might be… but not only is it (so far, i'm not far in) insightful, it's also deliriously well written. i am absolutely head over heels for the writing style so far; my unending kudos to you!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2016
This is amazing! I'm laughing so hard!
Random Person chapter 4 . 1/29/2016
This really is the way that 'School of Prayers and Miracles should have been handled.
ScottishHarper chapter 3 . 11/16/2014
Really enjoying this - awesome work!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2014
Now this is what I call a fanfiction. It takes away the bad taste from Grace Ann's deformity. This is what I expect from a fanfiction that includes religion. Well done!
Sinilumi chapter 4 . 10/25/2014
This fic is very enjoyable but it doesn't really work as a parody. Having the Dursleys raise Harry in a different, yet still abusive, way, is actually a good story idea on its own right. That said, I like how you manage to portray the Dursleys as abusive jerks without ever actually referring to them as anything other than "righteous", "good Christians" etc. They're even pretty hypocritical - Dudley gets to celebrate birthdays and they make A BOY do household chores.
outside the crayon box chapter 4 . 10/16/2014
Ooh, this is so great. Love love!
Mycroft-mione chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
This is very funny. Very, very funny. I bet you would have way more views than Grace Ann if she didn't have as much hate mail. Thank you for this piece!
-Myc
Shotogun chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
You should make hagrid seem nice but have him suddenly brutally murder a hogwarts student as a form of punishment, ya know, because he's a demon or something like that in your story.
Shotogun chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Well written and entertains. I would say you went quite over the top with the more unsettling stetotypes such as the dursleys condemning people to hell.

The only problem I have with this is the fact your parodying a fix that is much more subtle in its cliches. Your version comes off like your trying too hard and it ruins the joke. Try being more subtle about the cliches and avoid overstating facts about what the characters believe. Instead of having an entire chapter devoted to the backstory just make some dialogue between the characters and add little details and hints for the reader to fill in.
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