oh the cruelty

This is so cute! We all know Jaune is a great strategist, though. Ruby's gonna learn the hard way not to fall for his tricks.

Yesssssss. This is quite funny, and I would like to see what happened next.

That was good! Jaune needs to do something nice for Ruby to make up for tricking her. Maybe he could take her out to dinner... [shipping intensifies]

That ending... I love it... MORE.

I like this! Its about friendship and its funny!

OH the twist at the end. XDXD Nicely done.

No! Don't let it end there! Ah ruby you gullible adorable little child...

Man, now I'm kinda sad that Jaune tricked Ruby. My only consolation is that when Ruby finds out Jaune is a dead man. Great story, great writing and great idea for capture the flag.

That was a twist! Jaune's slicker than I thought!

Poor Ruby. LOL

I thought something was off when Jaune said even Pyrrha he would be better out of the way.

Nice job on something so short!

Oh wow how devious of Jaune. What you lack in fighting skills you make up in tactic. Well played Arc well played. Still I hope you come out with one last chapter so we can see how poor Ruby felt about getting played and possibly how Jaune has to make it up to her. That's me though.

Good short story.

Mischievous! I like it!

Keep up the good work!

I'll check out your other stories, maybe you have a RWBY one that's a bit longer.

LONG LIVE JAUNE!
LONG LIVE RWBY!

That's just devious.

God damnit Jaune. You have betrayed me. Then again, well thought out.

A nice funny chapter. I seriously liked this, good job.