J'aime bien cette fic.

I liked this story it was great.

poor Chichi, I always thought her life was very hard, her husband died two times, taking care of two children herself, she always loved to Goku and understood him until his last days. besides, I can not believe Vegeta has saved the matess Kakarotto, ironic xD

very good fic ;), good job :D

neat.

I think it was a great story. is there more?

Very impressive _

I'm a fan of V/CC but I'm very glad that this wasn't. Fics where the victim is about to commit suicide and is saved by a present or future love interest, one, disturb me, and two, ring incredibly false. As it was, it was intense and gorgeous. Some of Vegeta's lines had me smiling in spite of the grim situation, because they were so very in character, and probably the only thing in the world that could've persuaded ChiChi not to kill herself. An excellent fic.

Wow. Nice dark fic, I just loved it. Yes, here it is people: There are times when Vegeta's rudeness and straightforwardness is the best cure for a problem. Enjoyed every second of this.

oooo... my like. It was deep and dark. I never really thought about Chi like that... but then again i can. This story was so immensely awesome you have left me speechless *sits in awe*

Very nice. I hapened to review a different story of yours and looked this one up. Once again - Realistic. Some people come up with the stupidist ideas... Anyhoo, the fact that Vegeta could identify with Goten's position was extreamly unexpected, but very, very true. It could happen! It makes sence. Writing quality is beautiful as usual. Hope to see more of this and othe storys. Harpy. lol.

Wow! Yes...ha! this was VERY angsty and you did a marvelous job portraying Chi-Chi's hopelessness, I could definantly understand and even sympathize with her plight and I think you did a great job making it believeable that Vegeta would help her. You gave him and edge while still keeping him Vegeta and BELIEVE me I know how difficult that can be so I definantly give you a hats off in that respect...

*grins*

Is that all though? I hope not...I could see Vegeta helping Chi through the hard time, honestly if a story's well written who says every relationship ends up as a romance? Chi's obviously deidicated to Goku...where was I going with this? Oh Yeah! With your writing you could just as quickly make a friendship fic.

You're an awesome writer and this is a marvelous fic.! ...yup that's what I meant to say all summed up in one sentence.

*end rambling* _

you did agood job... Vegeta helping and, most of all, helping Chi-chi? Really unlikely.

I'm waiting for the rest of it.

harpy oh very nice CAN'T YOU JUST HAVE CALLED HER WOMAN like vegeta normaly did ha.

Very Nice. I wonder if ChiChi had left a note at the house would Vegeta have just turned around and went back to CC with Goten

Vegeta was right, it would be a coward's way. ChiChi may be a shrew but she's no coward.

Waiting...

i liked it... good job!