I want a continuation? This is really good and emotional.

Thank you. So much

.that's s was extremely touching. im glad ive never been in this typical e f situation or know of someone in this situation but wow this...i have no words. its amazing. i think hiccup having jack is the best thing ever...wanting to end it all but not wanting to leave jack. this was awesome.

I just want to say that this is one beautiful story. Even though I didn't cry until the end, I could identify with that feeling of depression Hiccup has, and then guilt. Especially after suicide attempts. You feel bad about trying to end your life and then you feel worthless being alive, I understand that feeling, and it might be one of the reason I relate to this Hiccup so much. I'm really glad that he found Jack as an anchorI think it was really sweet of them.
Good story 10/10 loved it.

Uhm I'd like to thank you for this wonderful fic, like... Don't get freaked out I didn't try anything after reading it, but I did try suicide way to many times and other stuff... This fic really helped me out, I don't know how, but it did.
Thank you.

This was a very sweet story. I have a friend who I think might be a bit depressed and I try to help him he's a really great guy but sometimes he has low moments... Thanks for writing this I gave me some things to think about. I hope you continue writing and that you feel better about yourself you have some skill in writing keep posting please.

I was a little confused by the writing style at first but I turned out to really enjoy it and as much as I was confused I realized this is the same way I would write in my journal when I had not the most happiest of may sound silly but I was going to call a hot line one time but I thought I would be a waste to the people who needed more help than me so I stopped myself, so I am glad that Hiccup pressed dial. The only thing I would want to read more about is Aster and Hiccup, I feel like Aster would do more even if Hiccup hung up, like go to his house and talk to him or something. However you were doing time skips so the re is no saying that it didn't happen. You did an amazing job, captured the way people with depressive thoughts think well, and I hope you did not have to experience this. :)

I loved this story and I feel that it has a really good message. I went through suicidal feelings before and still do on occasion and it is always good to have a tale you can relate to that reminds you that you can make it you just have to stay alive and find that one reason to cling to life with both hands.

Wow, this is really good! You know, I think I'll suggest this to my friend! Thanks!

Wow. This is one of the most amazing things I have ever read. It was well written and well, since I have gone through this kind of phase it speaks volumes to me. I teared up while reading it, adding the part that I was listening to Alex Goot's cover of "Maps" was even making the tears fall easily. Thank you for writing this!

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That pretty much sums up my feelings on this.

Wow. This is seriously a well done fanfiction! It's always hard to tackle teenage attitudes towards such heavy issues such as suicide and do it well from a believable POV-very well done! I love the relationship between Hiccup and Jack as well as the modern!AU personifications of all the characters: it shows a lot of creativity and confidence! If anything, my one critique would be to have a little bit more of a flavorful writing style; something very personal to you, and that only comes with a lot of practice (something that I am working on and you're getting there-already better than some of the pros! Remember that Rough and Ready reading? ugh). So you're already on the right track. Great work, love!

that was beutiful and scary and awesome in the awareness and just wow

I think i gonna cry. It's so emotional and so realistic.

This was such a sweet, but sad story. Thank you for writing this. Depression is a terrible thing and nobody should ever have to suffer from it. When I was a teenager I went through a period of time (3 years) of being like this. I got help though. I think it is VERY important to address issues like this. I am glad that Hiccup had understanding and caring friends. Again great story and thank you for passing the message. 3