Hope rest of chapters come soon.

Love the humour you put into this, I could very easily see them like this on the battlefield. And Wrex, gotta love him and that line about 'Princess' makes me laugh every time.

You drew a good image of James as the professional soldier I believe him to be, capable and quick. I'm glad you used his line too as they try to explain to Traynor about Shepard. There are some lines in game that are too good to ignore.

All up a fast paced, amusing and action packed chapter. Looking forward to what happens next.

Lol poor Traynor. I'd be scared of Wrex too.

Hope for more chapters soon

Go Shepard go! Really liking the story! I'm replaying Mass Effect 3 now and every time I see Vega I think of your locker room scene. Thanks. XD

Woo hoo, you're back.

I love this, you had me laughing at James' confusion/doubt/thinking Lola had gone crazy. And Wrex, trust him to be calm and collected, never doubting Shepard for a moment. You captured the whole thing wonderfully, with the humour, the camaraderie and trust that comes with being on Shepard's crew.

I loved this scene in game and you've made me love it more here with the added thoughts that we only imagine happening. Bring on the fight for the Normandy - can't wait to see what you do with that. Great stuff as always and I hope life isn't treating you too badly.

Please make more chapters soon

Can you please make more chapters

This is so cute and entertaining. I love that Garrus is willing to help James out; he's the perfect wingman. Looking forward to !

LOVE IT SO MUCH. I don't even ship Shega. I'm Shekarian to the core. But this fic is so perfect.

That has to be as frustrating as hell - so close and yet so far. That opening conversation was brilliant, the heat between them is obvious and it has to be driving them nuts that they can't take it further.

Love your take on meeting the clone and how James can see right through her. His thoughts make this much more enjoyable, his enthusiasm is wonderful and I can see a constant grin on his face as he's blowing a hole in the roof of the archives.

Loved the banter in game but you've added touches that give it more emotion and the connection between them all is crystal clear and perfect. Very well done.

Can u please make more chapters.

oops! :D

I wonder how the rest of the crew are going to react when they realize there's more between James and Shepard than they thought?

I love the story, and I'll be checking daily for updates ;)

I hope other chapters come out soon

I have to say I really like this story! I think you capturd James' personality really well. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D