Awesome story. Love it!

This story was amazing; I really enjoyed it!

I’m really confused. I know who two of the pairs are (Victoria/James, Irina/Laurent) but who is the other pair?

I read this before and had been searching for it for over a year now. By a stoke of genius, I realised to look for Alec, Jane and bella together and here it was.

This was the first twilight anything I ever read. Hadn't read the original and don't plan to because there are amazing works like this to appreciate.

this story was super engaging. The journey the siblings made from their slight innocent, majorly sadistic and quiet selves to the fucking badass super strong vampires they are and their interactions with their loved ones was a major bonus.

I had been waiting for Isabella to get her mate and then you add Anastasia. I FUCKING CRIED TEARS OF JOY.

I honestly don't know how I can show more appreciation for this, than to review with my limited vocabulary do others can catch a glimpse for the jaw dropping edge of the chair sitting amazingly awesome FUCKING FANFIC

Highly recommend for everyone who wants to read.

ANYWAY, KANUKAI OUT

‘You could drink from trees for all we care.’
Caius cracks me up!

Is the traveller Carmen?

I personally loved Wuthering heights but I saw it less as a love story (I completely agree that if you read it that way it would be awful frankly) and more as a study on how the environment you grow up in can influence you and your interactions with others. It interested me in how it portrays nature Vs nurture but not as much a romance as them against each other and the world. The disgusting and horrible parts of it as well as the fact that none of the characters are actually likeable I felt fit utterly non-romanticised messages in the book. I admit it isn't perfect however; I would have been interested to see how her writing progressed in further novels.

This was quite the tale. I'll admit, I still took Isabella as "Bella". It only became a bit difficult to keep the two apart when it got to the Forks' Bella. Even then, I thought of the Forks' Bella as a different character. *winks*

With that said, I really enjoyed following Isabella, Alec, and Jane through their beginnings and new life. I liked how the three had and maintained the closer bond, even when Jane and Alec found their mates. I thought the relationship between Jane and Demetri was quite odd though. However, it worked for them. I thought Alec and Renata's relationship was very sweet.

Isabella's relationship with her mate (trying not to give away the story in this review), while very grown-up like seems a bit detached, but yet, not. They seem in-tune, but since they don't flaunt their bond/relationship, from an outside or distant view, it seems a little cold. However, having been on the "inside" as a reader, knowing their looks and body language share more than one might see if they aren't paying attention to the couple.

The relationships throughout the entire castle were fun and intriguing, even from the three "kings". There was a real community that was also like a family within the castle.

Oh my! It seems you really don't like the Cullens though! Oh my! Their part of the story was a bit harsh, but not completely undeserving... especially for Edward.

Isabella was very strong, brave, protective, and so much more. Her quiet demeanor showed she observed and thought things through. Her brother is more like Isabella than his twin, who is his opposite in many ways. While Alec is calm/subdued in many ways, Jane is rash. Jane has her sister to keep her from acting as she might without Isabella in her life. While the twins have a connection, it is Isabella who helps them to be themselves, but within reason.

All-in-all, I enjoyed reading this story.

Should condense chaps 1-5 into a single prologue chapter.

I love these last lines... They are so poetic and captivating. You are extremely talented

I have shivers damn

I LOVE IT

Got your email but it said your mails are overstuffed so my email didn't come through. Well here it is.

I will definitely stick around to read you re-write of the story. Also don't be embarrassed about your story, even with all its flaws is one of my favourite Twilight fanfiction's!

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I really liked this story, it was a bit different from the others. The idea making Isabella, Jane and Alec siblings hooked me instantly. But I think this story would have been even better if you didn't give Isabella, Jane and Alec mates, like you said multiple times in the story that the bond between the three was stronger than even mate bonds. I think you could have done a lot more with that idea just keeping the three together and explore their relationship between the three more(you don't have to go and make an incest relationship but maybe something just closer or near incest, or not whatever), they really didn't need mates the bond the three had was much deeper than that. Also I Thought the Volturi were a bit too soft, don't get me wrong I like the Volturi idea that they are a family a lot, but I don't know sometimes it just felt too soft for the Volturi. That basically is it, overall a good if sometimes a bit messy story.