What a lovey story! I like your writing style!

lol. wow. this was really good.

Well that was a good read. A few minor spelling mistakes here and there but not a big deal. Thanks for sharing.

I love how you only recapped what has happened so far in the beginning because you decided to stick to the original story only with a fem! Bilbo. Too many writers waste our time by basically copying the Hobbit storyline word for word or the movies and just insert their own character or a female Bilbo. The way you wrote this made it new and exciting to read instead of boring and repetitive. Thanks for sharing.

This story's amazing! I'm so glad I read it!

Question about the mysterious knocking? XD Kili just had to reveal -unknowingly- that he's a virgin!

Great story thank you you're amazing

Holy Durin's Day. Such an awesome fanfic, just where is the sequel? Need to know what happens next! lol.

Awesome job once again :).

Alonia143.

That's quite a contradiction. Kissing Thorin in the dungeon was scandalous, and would appall people if they did it publicly, but Hobbits go for tumbles in the hay on a regular basis? Just something I thought I should point out.

Á truly epic tale. I cannot wait to read the sequel.

I'm favoriting this story and there's nothing anyone in the world can do about it. So there. I'm very much looking forward to the sequel to this!

This was better than the movies

This was so very good.

Gosh I was so scared that you would kill one of them, that when you brought back the Old Took's tale I already have tears in my eyes..I'm so glad for a happy ending eventually
Story was well written but I wish it could be longer have more episodes in it( wouldn't mind further extension either)
But of course one can never satisfy hunger for such a good story.
Huuge approval for the Author for your work, Good Luck with your next work.:)
(sorry for my poor English)

Update immediately, please!