Really beautiful!

Wow!
I am left speechless after every single one of your stories. They're not only captivating with the plots themselves, but you're excellent at capturing the thoughts of Dean. Kripke should hire you as a writer for the show, because you're incredible!
I hope that someday I can write as well as you can, but for the time being I'm going to keep reading your stories because they're so entertaining and well written - a combination that's difficult to find!
Keep up the amazing, spectacular work!

I enjoy that when Sam is in such a state there s no filter for him to prevent sharing how he feels without accusation or guilt. I think Dean is always in charge of the physical and Sammy is always in charge of the emotional. There are some moments where Dean lets his guard down in order to care for Sammy emotionally, like in the beginning of season 1, when Sam was reeling from Jessica's death. I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Dean probed Sam emotionally in that way. I don't know if you've read this fic, it's called Convenience Store. It compares their differences through childhood entertainment for each of them and how it was different. How Sam would always have his imagination to keep him satisfied and Dean always enjoyed physical things that he could take with him. It would be so cool for Dean to see Sam's emotional pain and try to heal that like he always tries to heal him physically. It's almost as if Dean feels bad that he can't heal that for Sam so by physically always being there for him maybe he's trying to make up for that. Especially centered around the end of season 8, Sam was so raw at that finale. Loved this fic it was great! Let me know if you want to read that story I found, the one I mentioned before (Convenience Store).

I really liked your ending to the episode and would have loved to see it in the show...

I bet the song was by either Metallica or Kansas... :)
Great story!

Either he is humming Zeplin or Hey Jude...I'm leaning towards Hey Jude

IF ONLY Sam's feelings was like that in Canon Season 9! (and I definitely not talking about the last final episode!)

Not that I wish to see him get hurt and bleeding all over and worrying Dean. Because I had enough seeing him pale and unwell.
But I would love to hear him that he's understand Dean's feeling as well. So Dean cab stay by his side too and not end up like this. Guilty and Hurting.

Love it. brilliantly written...which the episode went more like this!

I enjoyed this. Thank you

It was an excellent story! Thank you for writing it - Hayla

Noha Mostafa: thank you for writing such a beautiful story,,,,,your stories are amazing,,,I'm waiting for more

This is great! It's all medicine-y! And I love your attention to detail!

I enjoyed this story very much!

Didn't realize I could only post one review per chapter

So here is the rest of my review...

I have read some of the other reviews and don't think I can say anything better than they already have. You always provide us with the ending we all want to see, regardless of how the writers feel.

In your AN you state that you love Dean. Well you must, you are the one who made me see him in an entirely different light and come to love him too (just not as much as a hurt Sam :) )

Thanks Marianna!

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It was really such a relief to see this brotherly connection take place, and I fear it is going to take something catastrophic to get us there on the show. (This week poor Sam was nearly bed dry and nobody said anything about it...)