Reviews for After One Tale Ends
Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 1/28
Love that she can make him laugh. Nice dialogue that streched for days. heh.
Perlz chapter 1 . 2/23/2019
I love how Bilbo was the one who apologized In this. It's usually only Thorin. And I LOVE how she said she chose Thorin as her king. :)
Montara chapter 4 . 1/2/2018
Will there be a sequel with the new Fellowship? Hope so. And more about Bilba and Thorin..they are young because of the ring and have so much time to next adventures. Thanks for sharing this sweet story.
Montara chapter 3 . 1/2/2018
Glad you're giving us the option to read or not the lemon bit. Thorin is so patient with her. And she's very brave.
Montara chapter 2 . 1/2/2018
What a sneak, getting her used to him :))
Montara chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
So funny, how she was repeating herself over and over again. :)) I know it wasn't for them when she was in danger of losing her life to fever and wounds, but as a future memory, it was :D
thewolf74 chapter 4 . 5/11/2017
Please update soon..
multyfangirl21 chapter 4 . 6/6/2016
so she's preggos again so soon after the twins?
multyfangirl21 chapter 3 . 6/6/2016
i'm ok with almost smut , it more moral and less guilty pleasure to read
multyfangirl21 chapter 2 . 6/6/2016
heheh well now they're going to be very happy with what comes next
Mysteryfan17 chapter 4 . 1/15/2016
HA! Good riddance to that ring and this was so sweet. I was very red in that last chapter but I'm sure you got that in a lot of reviews. I like your idea on the Khuzdul and I'm surprised you couldn't find anything. Doing it from her half out of it and not knowing it (yet) worked as a way around it and I doubt anyone would have questioned too much unless it was out of interest as it didn't hurt the story at all. I wonder though... Fili and Kili having those younger cousins to influence... That must cause havoc. :)) 9.5/10
Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
Mix of sweet, funny... embarrassing in that I'm blushing like she is. I did note in this chapter, the times you meant 'shirt' it says 'shift'. I guess spellcheck or something did a number on you. Other than that... blushing.
Jafndaegur chapter 4 . 6/4/2015
Real cute story! Kudos to you!
yorushihe chapter 4 . 5/10/2015
Lovely!
Thank you for sharing :)
Hanna
Anime Princess chapter 4 . 4/23/2015
I LOVE this! A Female Bilba who gives more and more heirs to Durin's throne! And a Dis who holds Gandalf personally responsible?! LOL
And a female Frodo(a)?
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