Reviews for Loyalties
cinderelladreaming chapter 1 . 6/16
such an awesome story. binge read it.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/2/2017
This story was really well written. Suspense filled and well thought out plot. I love the moments with Reese and Carter. Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
jjgeraghty chapter 12 . 3/7/2015
I love this chapter and can't wait to read more!
literaturechick chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
Very nice close. Thanks.
Lady Sundiver chapter 12 . 2/23/2015
Yay! I love happy endings!

Joss is back in her brownstone and is finally working for Finch. Her old partner wants her to come back to NYPD homicide, but we all know, she will work MUCH better with her new partner, the Man in the Suit!

The final few paragraphs with their 'easy banter' was fine by me. Welcome home Joss!

Thank you for finishing this story. It a long time coming, but well worth the wait.
Lady Sundiver chapter 11 . 2/23/2015
After all that Joss and John have been through its nice to see light at the end of the tunnel.

Charlie's advice was perfect for John.
SWWoman chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
Awwww, Joss is back where she belong, in NY with John, Finch and Fusco. The team is back together, just as it should be!
Jhill88 chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
Aww what a cute ending I'm glad they finally made up.
ReadtoRelax chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
Very enjoyable end. I am glad John came to his senses and with a little friendly interference by Harold he didn't have to travel all the way to D.C. To tell her.
elaine0510 chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
Thanks for this story! I always seeing a new chapter posted. I guess we'll never know why things went south after Rykers, but I liked your explanation. And Charlie was a special treat too.
oaktreeX chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
I just love this ending - and especially love how Fusco is fighting to get her back on the NYPD Force. Good job.
Devereauxpoi chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
This was a lovely ending! I really liked that Joss overheard the conversation. I can imagine the look on John's face! I'm hoping you add an epilogue. It would be great to see how they handle being partners and if Joss returns to being a cop. Thanks for another great story. I love your writing so much!
kayla2 chapter 12 . 2/22/2015
What a perfect, beautiful ending. I'd love to read an epilogue or a whole other story on their Christmas together! :) Please keep writing.
jjgeraghty chapter 11 . 2/18/2015
Loved the chapter and can't wait to read what happens next!
literaturechick chapter 11 . 2/16/2015
Thanks for a great update. It's good that Joss is finally in the know. Thanks Finch.
Looks like John is making some much needed progress in the emotions department.

Thanks.
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