Reviews for When There's Trouble
Guest chapter 71 . 1/27/2018
Thanks for this awesome story. Your commentary is what sold me on it and you're no slouch at writing, either. God bless you.
Guest chapter 55 . 1/27/2018
You should copyright the word spacist. That's gold. Gonny and the Tri-Tones deserves a t-shirt. The Slade joke in the End Part 3 is one of the funniest things I've read so far and it's not even part of the story. What you said about having readers to have fun with and be inspired by is what I hope to do, too. Thanks for reminding me why Fanfiction is such a cool thing. I'm hoping to write a Teen Titans story myself.
Guest chapter 54 . 1/27/2018
Your theory on Raven's hope and belief defeating Trigon is brilliant and I can never look at this situation the same way again. Love reading your thoughts on all of these episodes.
Guest chapter 32 . 1/27/2018
I noticed Northern Star on your fav list. I'm halfway through it and I LOVE IT so much. But I would also recommend "Dust" from the same author. It deals with the ramifications of who triggered the dust and the mystery surrounding that. I think you'd like it. One of the best stories I've ever read, fanfic or otherwise. Also, your author's notes alone make this story worth the price of admission.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/27/2018
I wholeheartedly agree with all your thoughts on this episode. Whenever I think of the show, this is one of the first episodes that pops in my mind. The way Robin turns around when he thinks Kitten's tapping his shoulder, ripping off his tux, Kitten's faces, all of it is utter BRILLIANCE! Really enjoy this series you wrote. One of the best fics I've read on here and definitely one of my favorites.
Rosalind2013 chapter 71 . 12/26/2016
Hey there! I didn't realize that you'd updated, but here I am! I checked back and was excited to see that Trouble in Tokyo was up!

Hooked on Phonics: I was so lost at first, but I knew there was going to be something to tie back into the movie. I was so right. The background story for the random guy Starfire kissed to learn Japanese? Brilliant. I never would have thought of that take on it, and that's what makes this short story so amazing! I loved his companion too, the dynamic between the two really drove the story. I found myself really laughing at their banter, which really speaks to your skill in writing strong characters!

Gauntlet: I share your fascination with the ink-creature chase, and that plot line's "open-to-interpretation" sequence of events. I remember watching this the first time, and I think the scariest moment of my childhood was the shadow creature creeping around behind Raven. Terrifying. Also, I love the Starfire focus! I think she's one of the most commonly botched/ignored characters on this website, so I always love when she's represented well! Cyborg's attempt to be cool was so hilarious too!

Frame: So I'm super impressed with the comparison you drew between the Slade incident and the framing in this movie. I didn't make that connection, but upon reading your story, it was so obvious. Your characterization of Robin is so intense, and I think it suits his personality really well. I think the juxtaposition of the serious moments in the movie with the silly/goofy stuff was meant to balance out. It couldn't be too focused on the "Robin might be a murderer" plot line, because that was too heavy for a kids movie. So the other characters' antics were especially wacky to distract from it a bit. *shrugs* I mean, I guess it worked?

Vacation's Where I Wanna Be: Oh. My. Gosh. This story was fabulous! Beast Boy's nicknames for the ink creatures, the ink creatures causing trouble at the Tower, and the fact that the ink creatures were even there at all. It was all hilarious! Beast Boy's remarks on the obvious weirdness are so humorous, and I especially loved his reaction to the cat girl. "We don't talk about the last one."

As always, I loved your review/critique of the movie! You always make such good points, and are so thorough about making sure you hit all the finer points of it! Great job on this story! It's one of my favorites!

~Rosalind
MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
So, first off, I read your profile, and was highly impressed. As someone who actually cares about my stories being errorless, I really appreciated finding another writer who feels the same way. I also appreciated how you said so straight off, because I leave reviews for people with tips on how to improve their work, and often, they aren't received well. It's nice to know that I won't be insulted for trying to help. Furthermore, I thought your analysis on why shows don't kill people off insightful, interesting, and logical. I whole heartedly agree with a condemnation of pointless death, but I also like to explore how group dynamics change when one of the characters is dead, and how that also changes with the circumstances of the death. However, I agree that the death card is overplayed, and numerous deaths don't automatically make a story exciting or well done.
I came to this story with high expectations, and they are more than fulfilled. I could tell also immediately whose point of view it was from and which episode it was referring to. You write well and engagingly, and the characters' voices are spot on. I enjoyed it so much, and look forward to reading this story and the rest of your writing.
Have a great day,
MM13.3
kouchiwa chapter 71 . 11/5/2016
augh I can't believe this fanfiction is over~... I really enjoyed your work, the last story is really cool (I love how the ink monsters live with the Titans now). This collection of short stories is well written and thought out; I look forward to any of your future works!
Thepurplethread chapter 71 . 10/28/2016
Oh wow. This ending...it just gives me so many feels right now. It's funny, but I started watching this show at almost the exactly same time as you started this fic, and it's always felt so special to me. I've kept checking every update for years now, and honestly, every chapter has never failed to make me laugh out loud. I love the way you talked about the episodes, and the things that made you laugh in each one, it always made me feel like I was reliving the first time I watched the show. It's impressive and amazing that you wrote a chapter on each and every episode for the series, and it's just really, truly awesome.
bloomscool chapter 71 . 10/26/2016
Man time sure flies, well now that you've finished the series I think you're ready for comics. Just remember that the Teen Titans Go comics take place at random points in the show, look up the list and after you find one search for it either on the Teen Titans blogspot or anywhere else that will let you read it for free oh and don't bother looking for the sparktop one because I'm pretty sure it's not online. Look forward to what you do next
A-LionGleek chapter 71 . 10/25/2016
At last. At long last. The long awaited grand finale update has finally come. And it. Is. Fantastic! Good God, where do I begin? I just LOVE this grand final chapter! SO WORTH THE WAIT! But hey, now for individual stuff.
Story 1: Interesting, and quite entertaining. :)
Story 2: Fantastic way to have the fights end! I totally never at all thought about any of the Titans managing to join up and work together to stop their respective opponents, and I guess it would only make sense that the monsters could be harmed with their own attacks and those of their brethren. And I suppose it would also make sense for Cyborg and BB to eventually pull a switcharoo on Timoko and Nya-Nya.
Story 3: Also a fantastic look inside Robin's head. And good ship tease to! :)
Story 4: Pretty funny and enjoyable to. Nice to see that, at least in this story, the Titans manage to befriend one set of incarnations of Mecha-Boi, Scarface, Nya-Nya, and Timoko (and for the record, Boss Borot is the name of the Mazinger character that Timoko is based on, not the name of Timoko).
Review: Wow. There is so much I could say in response to this. Except now I'm afraid I'll just run out of room and have to split up my review into multiple reviews. Yeah, I think I'd best continue to discuss the matter of what you had to say in your review through use of PMs.
Jokes: Yeah, best I do the same thing here as with the review.
That all being said, I'm very glad indeed to have stood with you for so long over the course of this grand epic project. I am also glad that this has left such an impact on you. Feel free to rest now before doing any more writing (or start leaving your promised reviews for MY stories). Seriously. You've earned it Dork. :) And yeah, once again, thank you so much for the ride. I enjoyed every second of it. Be proud. :)
ZadArchie chapter 71 . 10/25/2016
An apt and much awaited ending to one of my favorites. Thanks for the memories!
IceWarrior13 chapter 71 . 10/25/2016
Best. Teen. Titans. Fanfiction. EVER! OF ALL TIME!
pineapplesonsyrup chapter 70 . 8/24/2016
Is Trouble in Tokyo comeing out? I would love to see it!
pineapplesonsyrup chapter 2 . 8/24/2016
Loving this fanfiction so far:)
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