This was really good! I loved the concept. It would be interesting to see what would happen as a result of the Arkenstone incident.

A realy enjoyable plot )

This was a super interesting concept. The detailing, and pace were very nice, and I really loved how fluffy and cute the ending was! Very good :3 I sort of want a continuation of this maybe, dealing with the BoFA and Thorin's death making Bilbo go all hollow again; and maybe this time, Frodo's unyielding love for his Uncle can help him through it? Just a thought.

Definitely original, and quite creative. I enjoyed it. It created images in my head, just as good writing should.

This was an amazing story! Great job.

The idea of emotionless Bilbo is actually more intimidating than I would have imagined. Good work.

this is really good please keep up the great work

I like it! Not Thorin's reactions to being in love with Bilbo, but I LOVE how Gandalf told him and THorin fought to bring Bilbo's emotions back!

I like it