Very sweet short story!

Very poetic and amazing read altogether! 3

LOVE IT!

AWWW that was one of the cutest things I've ever read! Great job :)

* aggressive a plausible from the Supernatural fandom *

Loved it. Short, sweet and VERY well written..

awesom...i want mooore

Fangirling hard over here! This was so good! I loved every bit, definitely going in my favorites! Just one thing though. I don't think "a weird indifference" is what you're looking for, maybe something like 'it was reflex for Cas to ask...' or 'the sensitivity of his grace prompted the angel to...' or i suppose keep it, whatever you like :) love this beyond! Its totally crazy to believe English giant your first language, you're totally rockin' it!

Xoxo

This was a sweet story. Loved the wing kink and Cas being able to see Dean's soul when they made eye contact.

Beautifully written. A masterpiece. You should be proud.

Wow. This was good. Made me all warm!
Just love a dominant Cas.

Thanks for sharing.
Favoriting.

love this! they are so good together. I can't wait to see more of your work!

Wow. You should be SO proud of yourself. Your writing is head and shoulders above many for whom English is their first language. Your story is also very sweet. Now, to the constructive part. You have the speech flow for Cas down, but Dean's is a little too formal. More contractions, try can't instead of cannot for Dean. Also, your use of indifference, in English that usually means a lack of caring about the subject at hand. I'm not sure what word you're looking for, maybe imbalance or something similar. But all in all this is an excellent story, and excellent writing. Kudos on your work.

yay!