| Reviews for Hive |
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Reader chapter 3 . 4/15/2016 cool story, I wish you would continue |
Blaze1992 chapter 3 . 8/16/2015 Huh the ceph as good guys not as genocidal killing overlords. That's different |
thor94 chapter 3 . 8/6/2015 interesting. would like a new chapter. a shame you skipped naruto transformation, i would have liked to see the surgery. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2015 good story update soon |
ShinigamiNoKitsune209 chapter 3 . 3/27/2015 And here I am waiting to see the next chap. PS: Do you go to "Too much anime is not enough"? It's a group on fb. they're quite open except about hentai and a few things. |
LuBu081 chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 Looking back on that chapter, it always pissed me off how Naruto just demanded the Kyuubi to 'pay rent.' You think Kyuubi wanted to be sealed. Honestly, even when I didn't know what I know now, I grew a big dislike for Naruto when that chapter came out. Naruto has no one to blame but his own attitude. |
Arc-Angel-Of-Fire chapter 3 . 1/18/2015 So...does this mean Naruto won't be getting paired up with someone? poor bastard to die a virgin and now it looks like he'll live gods knows how long and still be a virgin. might as well have him turn in his M-Card and be done with it. |
Gillespie chapter 3 . 9/10/2014 That was a great chapter please let us the readers know when you're updating for another chapter you shouldn't slow down on the story it's really good. |
Karlos1234ify chapter 3 . 9/9/2014 Tuesday September 9, 2014. This is very interesting. In my opinion Naruto should be very distant and slightly cold towards to everyone. Due to such hardships and a tough upbringing. Or you can Naruto be neutral towards everyone. What has the Konoha 9 (12 if you cout Team Guy) done for Naruto? Have any of them made a attempt to alleviate his pain? Nope. Hinata 'stalked' Naruto periodically and did nothing to stop his suffering. Most of his classmates and Jounin senseis think less of him. Hiruzen announced his status to the entire village AFTER the village was just attacked. At most his "Comrades" are really associates at best. Expendable if crossed. |
NarutoXAnko099 chapter 2 . 3/30/2014 Please continue this is a good story. You just need longer chapters. |
jmorris1501 chapter 2 . 3/30/2014 Very nice. Keep it up. |
coduss chapter 2 . 3/30/2014 Good chapter, any hope for a pairing? |
jmorris1501 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 It's a pretty good idea. MAybe just flesh things out a bit, add more detail. And just to comfirm, your Kyuubi is more apathetic than hateful? I look forward to your work. |
johnnyjr100 chapter 1 . 3/21/2014 Amazing hope to see more. |
Michael chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Both chakra and hive mind energy. |