I liked this story. I think you captured that characters quite well. There are a few English mistakes, but since it was originally a different language that make sense a few things wouldn't translate as well.

Loved it! I hope I get to read more from you. Wish I could read German! :)

LOL, that was hilarious! I loved the 'catch my fist' line. I could definitely see this happening as well. It was such a fun read and I'm so glad I got to read it! :D

I'm not a morning person either, but this certainly brightened up the start of my day!