Most fanfic-Sherlocks can be rather verbose, which I understand during deductions or cases because he's excited, but this short, to the point Sherlock feels more...him, in these slices of life scenes. As always, beautiful, succiccnt, and masterfully written! I love the format of vignettes!

This is good

This is beautiful and perfect! Thank you for writing this.

I love this story! It realistically shows Sherlock's caring side while keeping everyone in character. I can totally imagine this happening.
Great job! :D

Oh my gosh this is so sweet! Of course this is the sort of thing Sherlock would do for John. Lovely! :)

D'awww. John and Mary were one of my favourite parts of season 3 and I like to see that dynamic extended. In general, just very enjoyable (and I really hope that we get to see more J/M/S bro thing in S4)

That was a very lovely and touching story, thank you!

Oh, I've been looking so hard for a fic portraying Mary in any manner other than absolutely damning. This was exactly what I was searching for, and was lovely. Your portrayal of Mary and Sherlock was great. You got so much through in just a few words. Thank you for writing this. :)

THIS WAS SO GOOD *STANDING OVATION*

Aw, lovely. And accepted headcanon. I like to think Sherlock was there for her the whole time, whether just through text or actual visits like this. You've captured their brother/sister relationship perfectly...and then rounded it off with the final line of dialogue. Of course it's for John. Everything they do is for John. :) Very nicely done!

That's beautiful! I love seeing the emotional maturity your Sherlock is showing. Well done!

Hey there!
That's soo cute! 3
And the characters are really well portrayed!
Although Sherlock is such an idiot sometimes i do believe he could be like that for John/Mary!

Thank you!
(for making my day a lot better ) )

This is really sweet. I have not seen that episode yet but I know all about it. It's confusing how and why she shot him and Sherlock isn't upset with her and she shot him without a problem.