Authors Note: This is just what I imagine the "Ultimate Beast" as I've come to call it, actually looked like in the very beginning of "Ultimate A" when it was chasing Alvin across Los Angeles.

Disclaimer: Alvin and the Chipmunks belongs to Ross B. and Fox Studios, and the story of "Ultimate A" belongs to MetalMunk15.


The "Creature" of "Ultimate A": First Form.

In its weaker form, the "Ultimate Beast" was nothing more than a black blur in the shadows to us. But with a little enhancement to the environment, and less factors for distorting it, we may just be able to see the creature for what it is.

First of all, let's just take away the rain and clouds, thus giving the creature a wash of moonlight. This lighting reveals that the first form, prior to the vehicle impact, looked a lot like a cross between a lion and a bear, the fangs a bit less pronounced and the eyes still reflecting light. But let's just assume it was day, and reveal this monster in the day light.

Once in the light of the sun, this monster looks like an overgrown otter with the head of a lion and the legs of a bear. The tail is still long, but it is obvious that this creature was meant to be a smooth skinned animal made with genetic engineering. But like most animals of any kind, this is not impervious to the effects of a vehicle impact.

The vehicle made impact with the creature on its left side, going at a speed of approximately 250 mph, cracking most of the creature's ribs beyond repair. Some of the bone shards actually punctured a few internal organs, such as the liver and the kidneys, causing some minor internal bleeding, but remember, the vehicle hasn't fully stopped yet, so the impact keeps going. When finished, the vehicle bursts into an orange cloud of sparks, the embers that land on this monster leaving burns that could in accumulation be of the third degree, but since they're spread apart, it's not even the first degree. The left arm is broken and the creature's head makes impact with the side of the vehicle, the brain suffering from a minor concussion, which could evolve into a full blown brain damage if left unnoticed.

Some other bone shards are now punctured through the side of the creature, now making the monster bleed externally. This loss of blood may make the creature weak, and un interested in its prey. For the time being, it decides to crawl back to its home for repairs, where it will be basically put down and have its brain transplanted into a special chemical cocktail used for repairing brain cells, a new receptacle body in the engineering process.

End of Description #2.


This was a different approach, in that I designed the creature's main form first, then went back and made its weaker form. Hope you guys and girls out there found this interesting, and that's it, MetalMunk15 you can say the rest on this story, and glad you liked my design. Again, leave a review by clicking the button at the bottom, and that's it, I'm finished here, so peace, I'm out!