XxpuppetmasterxX and LilMzSunshine
Chapter 12: Epilogue
A/N: The following chapter is not meant as a judgement on any reviews.
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When writers refer to themselves as "we" and to the reader as "you", it's two against one.
-Judith Rascoe
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LilMzSunshine,
The following review has been submitted to: Matchmaker, Matchmaker Chapter: 8: Happily Ever After
From flower-gurl96
Wow, this was... unexpected.
I really love your writing style, but this ending was a lot more sudden. I thought this would be a lot longer.
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XxpuppetmasterxX,
The following review has been submitted to: Make Me a Match Chapter: 8: Happily Ever After
From WTF BBQ FTW
Hey, I was loving this story, but the romance was totally out of nowhere. It's still well written, but I didn't expect the two of them to fall in love at all. It seemed out of character and didn't fit well with the plot.
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LilMzSunshine,
The following review has been submitted to: Matchmaker, Matchmaker Chapter: 8: Happily Ever After
From Twin Dragon Diez
Hey, what about the assassin? I mean, your writing is good enough that I don't mind the mushy romance (although it was a bit unexpected), but it's not like you to leave a plot hanging.
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XxpuppetmasterxX,
The following review has been submitted to: Make Me a Match Chapter: 8: Happily Ever After
From GreenLotus
This is the end? It's adorable! I totally did not see them falling in love! (Although, I guess we should have seen it coming... Youko and Kenta are based on Sunshine and you, aren't they? -wink-)
Are you two going to do a continuation?
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Shikamaru grinned sardonically as he read through the reviews on the latest chapters of the recently-completed Matchmaker Matchermaker and Make Me a Match. None of them were particularly good, but, then, Shikamaru had never understood the stories' popularity.
In any case, he also had inside information that XxpuppetmasterxX and LilMzSunshine had thought very carefully about the end of their stories. They were not expecting good reactions. In fact, they knew that the ending was sudden and disappointing. But they couldn't bring themselves to keep writing.
Also, as XxpuppetmasterxX had put it during their last "Anti-Writer's Block" breakfast, "It'd be nice if Kenta and Youko could live happily ever after, too. They are pretty much responsible for... well, everything."
On the plus side, the PuppyXSunny community would be very, very happy in a few days. At least, if Shikamaru's glimpse at Hinata and Kankuro's new notebook was any indication.
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A/N: Ok, that's the end.
I must say that I love this story very much... it may be a bit cheesy, but I never said it wasn't. I'm a sucker for a good romance that involves my favorite websites.
Thank you so much for your reviews, faves, and alerts on this!