Reviews for The Fool
annejoy chapter 1 . 6/6/2017
They are both right. And that's their dilemma.
I love the ending. Although she's angry she is admitting his needs. Great!
Thank you!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
Iowanmom chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I love J/C angst! While I preferable a stronger Chakotay, what this Chakotay wants, desires, needs for his soul to breathe life is so palpable! You write such beautiful emotion, such deep desires of the souls...I love it! I crave it! Thank you for this treat!
lizzy chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Yes he would be, mores the pity!
And yet I feel he is stronger than what he is portrayed here, but that's just me.
avngstories chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Ahh, more "Angst in Space". I never get tired of these little stories. Keep up the good work!
xxx chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Very nice! :-)
Aunt Kathy chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
I like the ending. And we all knew that Chakotay was going to be her damned fool... :)
Oystercatcher1 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
This story has a powerful emotional impact. Thank you.
skadoo chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Wonderful! Loved this, great word pictures! I need to be careful I don't break the exclamation key on my keyboard or I'd add another half dozen or so... A great Valentine to J/C AND still perfectly in cannon.