Such an entrancing story! Wish there was more.

LOL love the dialogue at the end of this chapter

Cool start, graceful writing.

Wow. Your story is somewhere between pretty damn good and omg-i-cant-rip-my-eyes-away-from-the-screen amazing. I really enjoyed it up to here, the characterization, the plot...everything really. Winn's and Ruan's relationship is slightly confusing at certain points but extremely intruiging. I loved this last chapter...it's funny to see him in the submissive position for once :P Very nice. Please keep writing! Im obviously not the only one dying to find out what's gonna happen int he next chap :D

Btw, will they actually get to a point where there's some sort of truce between them?

(Not asking for actual real love here but one can hope :P)

I would just like you to know that I absolute love the story. The intensity just breaks me, and I can't help but feel compelled to read on. You have a fabulous vocabulary and writing skill that I'm aching to steal.

THAT WAS THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ AND I JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU COULD YOU PLEASE POSSIBLE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER CUZ IM DYING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT YOU REALLY ARE AN AMAAZING WRITER PLEASE KEEP WRITING CUZ I LOVE EVERY SINGLE WORD THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ COULD YOU FINISH THE STORY OF YOUR NUMBER ONE FANFIC fan KEEP WRITING!

hi

um how cumz u havent updated in lyk a long time coz i relly think ur story is realy gud so plz pretty plz can u carri on

Hi, the story's very fun, please keep on writing!

Awesome story...I assume the dream plays a fairly important role? And that when she said it didn't work, that meant that she tried to teleport them? Very good.

Hi Mogget,
I haven't visited you're story in a while in the hope it would have been updated- you're exploration of character is convincing and engaging. I and I'm sure many others would want to see this sophistocated exploration of relationships finished!
Best Wishes
Anon

I am really enjoying this story. and now that Winn is getting a backbone... yay! Ruan has no idea what he's in for and neither do we... I can't wait until you update. It seems like it's been forever. I really hope that you continue this story and update soon, plez continue this story? I really really really am enjoying this story it's got such great characters. I mean Ruan and Winn alone are so unique and fabulous. I hope that you update soon so plez?/

Hurry up!

Loving it. You are a fantastic writer.

Keep it up!

hanz

aww! sweet soulmates fighting. cool chapter. like the way there was loads of parts including winn and Ruan. so sweet

-S

whoa! that ending was insane! i thought i would never see the day when winn got the best of ruan, even for just a second. and what a cliffhanger! nice job mogget!

The last chapter was very good, but I can't stand cliffhangers... You're a very talented writer, I was on the edge of my seat with that chapter. I hope you continue to write. (Sooner rather than later, hopefully)...Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens with Winn and Ruan, personally I hope that Myr leaves the picture all together, but then there wouldn't be much of a story...Good luck, although I don't know if you'll need it.

Kristin