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is this dead

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

This good

Que lastima que hallas dejado esta historia sin terminar

Nooooo ! : '( this was so great funny hot sexy want more so please update!

Hot and sexy :'v I love this story!
You is a very funny person :DDDD

So hot man :'v!
And you are very funny :'DDD

Take your review great man :'D!

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

i'm very sorry but this story is awful, naruto is way to eager to dispell wrong beliefs people have about him and to espouse virtues left and right, he talks like a 80 year old and is a complete mary sue. I came here, yes, expecting smut, but tastefully introduced and written smut. What i got was forced, tasteless and juvenile. Again i'm very sorry, i hope you can do better in the future, but i cannot read this.

bro u are a genius continue this story please

that was good keep the chapters coming

I love this fiction. The lemons and the pairing (harem for the win) are great. Too bad you haven't updated in years, just 5 chapters is a bit short *sob*

I especially like your Anko, I dislike it too that she is often written off as psycho whore. She was betrayed by Orochi and used as lab rat and everyone in the village hates her. If she isn't loyal and cared, she would have gone missing nin years ago! And sleeping around? There are 3 reasons why she didn't: either they hate her so much that they won't even want her or Anko simply don't want to give all those scumbags pleasure... furthermore, spreading her legs and giving her virginity would be an act of submission. Unthinkable.

Okay, granted, in the real world are enough sluts, so a Anko who loves to drink, handcuffs men to the bed and use them cowgirl style to overcome all her sorrow, loneliness and receiving hate is possible too, but that would be just sad and hard to read. I would like to think fiction Anko is a better person than those reallife sluts.

Hjk