i dont even like the summary... though the main reason for that is sakura whoreuno being listed as a main character

Well, your Sakura is a dumbass or playing a very dangerous game. She's a genin. Granted she is the daughter of their head interrogator but she isn't irreplacable.

And fuck you please don't continue this story

Please continue is good

Umm just a tip. When we write in the 24 hour system times are written as 1600 hours and not 16:00p.m. That is all and I hope you update soon :)

Story is nice so far. But I would like to point out that there are several spelling mistakes and misused tenses throughout the chapters. Maybe you could look through them and correct them. It would improve the quality of the story.

So, Kushina has already told Naruto that she was a container at some point. And that the Kyuubi was an all right entity. Did she tell him that it was a tree and not a fox? And...if Naruto already knew that Kushina was a container before, why would he believe himself to be a demon when he found out that Kyuubi was inside him...I mean, you can away with a lot by claiming shock, but this is stretching it.

A very good beginning. However, I found Minato explaining the truth about Kyuubi to the masked man a bit off putting. Particularly when he had to fight him later anyway. He tells something he hasn't told anyone within his own village, even Sarutobi, he would tell to an enemy?

Nice chapter but you made the ki mistake know the teamates know that something is off and they never would let this go
also even if he hides them this is not a very good course of action

Will Naruto receive any treasures of the Uzumaki Clan located in the Library.

how about Shinia

you probably could with enough evidence

nice chapter

Oh that's sick, your parents actually did that? I hope you cussed them the hell out. I would personally stay away from my parents if they did something like that, though they wouldn't, they're pretty cool when it comes to homosexuality. Anyway great chapter I hope that the next one is just as good.

I have a rather large mistake that i found. You witched between the japanese romaji names for jutsu, and some weird mix of the english names and the romaji. There's really no reason for it, you should pick either the japanese names or the english names, be consistent with it.

Quite an interesting story and I wonder what evil lies in Minato's head.