i will follow your story forever!

What a wonderfully written fanfiction! I especially appreciate the pace and tone you took with Athena and Simon's relationship.

This has been a wonderful slice of life so far. (Pardon the cake pun.) I love it! Can't wait for future updates! :)

Heehee, I can't picture Simon Blackquill drawing... on a cake or otherwise... But, it's an amusing thought. I like where this story is headed and think you should continue writing it. It's a shame this is the last available chapter... I was really into reading it. Do you ever feel disoriented when coming back to reality after reading a story? I only get that feeling when I'm really absorbed into a story, and I'm experiencing that feeling now. Please continue writing :)

I love this so far! Haha, it's a good mix of humor, drama, and some seriousness. I can't focus on writing a good review now, though, because I really want to read the next chapter. And, so I shall :)

hahaha Oh my god, i loved this )

This is a really cute story and I love this pairing. I like how yoube justified and incorporated Simon's...eccentrisms considering what the game says. I love slow build.

And YES Miles and Maya! It's so hard to find this pairing and I love the idea of them getting together since their personalities are so widely different yet they have the exact same interests and have a lot in common. There's so much material you can get from from them. I can see Maya marrying a top lawyer considering her status and how it's implied to be restored.

This is so cute! Please update!

LOVED THIS SO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE

Having just completed Dual Destinies, this story is exactly what I needed I love this pairing and you write them so adorably and in character
Eagerly awaiting the next update!

So I've read through this fic multiple times now and I think it's wonderful, but I have to say this chapter is my favorite. The moment with Aura's trial, and Athena trying to remind Simon that he doesn't have to be alone anymore, after he had been alone for so long...it's perfect. Athena is so earnest, and Simon's reaction is so spot-on. The whole "prisoner of seven years" aspect of Simon's life is such an intriguing thing to explore, and especially the issue of affection - and any physical show of affection. That is definitely something he would have to get used to again, and that small gesture of touching his hand like that has actually inspired yet another Cykesquill fic in my mind :3

Also the sex dream part in the next chapter is hilarious and great and I totally loved that, too, hurdur

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I NEED MOAR! IS SO ADORABLEZ!

Oh, I'm so looking forward to Simon trying to be friends with Klavier. Poor Apollo will tear out his horns- er, hair. I love this Cykesquill fic, instant follow and fav. I also saw the Harvest Moon reference, with Chelsea and Vaughn X3 gotta love the brooding cowboy. I also loved the fact of Edgeworth and Maya being together. Nice shot! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

asdfghjkladslj I love your story sooooo much :DDD I just love how you wrote Simon's internal battle of feelings for Athena... and Edgeworth and Maya, oh my ! and he was embarrassed, awww. I thought nobody except me shipped them :P I laughed until my stomach hurt with Aura's reaction of Simon's...dream, heh. Keep up, because this is a story I will not leave behind forgotten:D

This is really cute! Love their relationship!