Reviews for How to Help a Friend
Red chapter 20 . 3/13/2017
Yes that's it's it but first let me tell you here how there going to do it.

Hiccup and toothless must work together to get out and be free.

The teens on the other hand call stoick and while the dragons call their on species to help hiccup get out of there and I'm really freckling hell nightmare to see that.

And then the dragons would help hiccup and toothless out of here ,which is hiccup was more then a friend to them his more then a family towards the dragons
JustPastCrazy chapter 33 . 12/11/2016
Hmmmmm... could you combine options "overprotective friends" and " hiccup gets sick"?
Guest chapter 3 . 10/24/2016
FOR USELESS! WHO JAKCED MY KEYBOARD
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2016
DRAGONDRAGKNDRAGONDRAGONDRAGONDRAGONTOOTHLESSNIGHTFURYDRAGON,yep
Gabrielly790 chapter 33 . 10/14/2016
Opção dois (soluço fica doente e stoico tem que cuidar dele assim aproveita para melhorar a relação dos dois e fazer um belos momentos pai e filho) continua
BelloftheSea chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
I like the idea behind this. So far the writing style is very plain and the character dialogue rather cut and paste, but that's typical when you first start writing. As you continue, you'll develop a voice and style unique to yourself and learn to make the characters your own. I'm going to keep reading and hope to see that soon.
My only real problem with the story thus far is that it is not possible to diagnose amnesia before someone wakes up. Realms of fiction and Gothi's mysterious abilities aside, it's hard to fathom that she could determine this already. Also, after briefly looking at chapter 2, I see that the crew starts planning to help him before he ever wakes up, making their knowledge of his condition a considerable plot point. My recommendation would be to either have him wake quickly (or else do a brief time skip to make up for the time he was unconscious) and still have his amnesia revealed at the end of chapter one, or let suspense build for all the charactersby not revealing his condition until he wakes up. This is more believable and enjoyable.
undisclosed name chapter 20 . 8/6/2016
pls do more of this. this fanfic is awesome
Sadie Linn Cyr chapter 25 . 1/28/2016
I think option 1 would be better
Sadie Linn Cyr chapter 13 . 1/19/2016
I would say outcast or dragon island
thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 32 . 12/10/2015
Okay, this story is absolutely AMAZING! OMIGODS I LOVE IT! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! HAHAHA! BOOYAH! AAAAWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOO! BAM! BAMBIBOOZLED! HAHA! AAAWWWWWWOOOOOOOOO!
DaydreamingOnPaper chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
Will Hiccup freak out about his foot? I can't wait to continue! Very well done :)
MysticalKC chapter 32 . 12/29/2014
Amazing! I love it! :D
The dragon1010 chapter 33 . 11/6/2014
Great story
THE DRAGON1010
Emilykit14 chapter 33 . 10/29/2014
Please please please do a sequel! I think if you do a sequel you should do the hiccups friends are being over protective and hiccup gets sick and start having hallucinations. Just a thought :)
Hi there chapter 12 . 9/12/2014
Love it
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