Hold on, Dojo would have known about Chase being the first. He was there when Dashi, Guan and Chase were still together. Might wanna fix that

Mmmmm... I don't like how you made Raimundo Chase's new interest. Chase has evaluated all of the monks before, but only Omi stood out because of the amazing potential the small monk possessed.

You do realise raimundo is Portuguese not Spanish right?

This is the best XS story I've read yet. It so should get a sequel, or a prequel, since, while it gave a lot of great answers, it opened a lot of great questions

So cute x
you're a really good writer, well done on a great story x

I think that little hint was not that little :P

Aww, it was great watching this unfold...I'm sad to see it completed. Then again, I think every reader is sad when a favorite story is finished, ne?

Holy...holy fricking god dammit! This was amazing. I loved the ending, but I'm stuck wanting more. Will you be writing a sequel?

Hey! So I started reading this story when it first started, but then I forgot the title, but I finally found it again! Anyway, I love the story, it's amazing, and I find Rai and Chase's interactions just perfect. They have interesting parallels as well. (I'm sorry, I always wished they could have interacted at least once one-on-one other than that time in Saving Omi for like 5 seconds, and fanfiction is my only hope).

You're writing keeps getting better and better, and I enjoy every chapter more and more. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.

I totally love this story! The detail and the way you pull the reader in is amazing. I hope you'll post another chapter soon because once I started reading this, it was impossible to stop. :)

PLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSS CONTINUE (PUPPY POUT AND EYES)

*squees* Yay! An update! And awesome battle update! Great job Ocean :D Oh, I'm so proud of Chase right now *sniffles and wipes away happy tears* Now then, Chase, do the right thing and go thank the kind monks before returning to causing chaos and stuff.

Great chapter! Would love to read the next one soon!

this is brilliant. I'm afraid I don't have the time to rhapsodise about the story in the depth it deserves, but know that it's amazing. I love the depth and background you've given all the characters (I would love to know more about Chase) and I can't wait to read more

I love this story! I love Chase back story! I have to admit though I want hoping for more interaction between Kimiko and Chase. Maybe in a sequel? Please update soon

when is rai gonna prank chase? i hope it involves pears. lots of pears.