Reviews for The Boy with the Purple Umbrella
Krystal-Enderheart chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
AWWWWWWWWW THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR THE FEELS. EVEN JUST SMILING AT EACH OTHER.
Lily chapter 3 . 4/5/2015
I love the story, it would be cool to see something like Barry getting kidnapped and have some Rythian-Zoey butt whooping teamworks, but that probably won't happen...love it anyways and would like to see more! 3
Rangersan chapter 3 . 2/6/2015
Hey, this is amazing! You really ought to write more. I love how spazmatic Zoey's thought process is!
Yogscast shipper chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
can you please make another chapter of this?
Yogscast shipper chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
i really like this so far!
blackclaw chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
I love it! Oh pretty please with om nomy thinhs on top update now?
Krystal-Enderheart chapter 3 . 6/21/2014
Please continue! I love this story! PLEASE?
Asheepanda chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
I have a suggestion... MAKE MORE! pls D: I need it! *whimpers*
AshallynDXA chapter 3 . 1/21/2014
When can I have some more! THis is amazing, I love the twist on the Blackrock Chronicles!
Penguinz chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
OH MY GOD DO MORE I'M DYING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
OneBigMistake chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
Hi Sos that im using guest but i cant get on2 my account so yeah, enough blabbering and on with the review

I think this is good and that you should have stuff like for the 6th chapter or somthing that like the first kiss happens (assuming the summary is correct about the zoethian bit)

Peace out!

-Mistake
Steam Punk Diamonds chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Oh my god I love this! And of course only Zoey could make Rythian smile. Either way I just wanna tell you keep. updating. more. chapters. or I will hunt you down and kill you
iyf65yuijuyt chapter 3 . 11/26/2013
plz o plz make chapter 4, I will give you extea idea's when my computer stops being a spaz and lets me open my account so i can PM you more ideas!
OneBigMistake chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
I agree you are great at this, you should make more than 3 chapters
Guest chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
It's a great story! Keep up the good work!
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