i know that this fic was last updated in 2016, but i have to say this: i'm in love with this story. something about this fic makes me still wanting more. the plot is so fucking interesting and gaah i don't even know what to say anymore. thank you for writing this.

Okay so I know you haven’t updated in like two years but this story is GOOD. Like really good. I can’t stand reading some fanfiction because the writing is so awful but you have a real talent for it. I love the story and how you stay true to the characters while simultaniously making them your own. I know how hard finding the motivation to write is (I have many half finished stories in my head and only a few partially written down), but PLEASE dig deep and find it within yourself to finish it, one or two more chapters will suffice! I’ve been looking for a Junjou and Sekai cross over like this for FOREVER and it’s not only the story I like but...everything else! I know I’m just one fan but if you make this little dream of mine come true I could offer a story in return? It wouldn’t be as good as yours but I think you’d like it. Anyways, even if you don’t finish thanks a bunch for writing down what you did!

This is the best Sekaiichi/Junjou crossover! I hope you keep writing

Love me some aggressive Misaki. You struck a nice balance between having him move into a more proactive role but not turning him into an overnight sex kitten. I thought it was a wise decision to emphasize the mental/emotional aspect of the sexytimes, especially considering Misaki's inexperience with...well, you know :D It made for a much more memorable read than so many of the play-by-plays that are found in M rated stories.

I also have to say that I LOVE your characterization of Akihiko in this story. His character in canon is often so over-the-top when it comes to emphasizing his quirkiness, but you write him in a way that makes him seem intelligent and believable while still maintaining his whimsical and eccentric nature. Awesome job, as usual!

Aww yeah, Misaki giving head to Akihiko. Now that is a pleasant surprise :D Akihiko was so sweet and patient that I feel oddly proud of him...and of Misaki too, of course. It didn't really feel OOC to me; I could imagine Misaki acting like this when the opportunity presents itself. Man, I bet Akihiko will be thinking about it for days! Hehe...
This was a wonderful chapter! Thanks for the update.

Ohoho, I would love to know how 'wild' Akihiko used to be in his teenage years :P Anyway, I remembered reading this chapter before when I reached the part where Ijuuin was harrassing Misaki. It's one of my favorite parts, so I'm glad I got to read it again.
Takano doesn't want anything to do with Akihiko in this fic, but I recall you writing a Takano/Akihiko story quite some time ago xD Frankly, I couldn't stop thinking about that when I read the last parts.
Thanks for the updates!

Far too late, but I'm finally here to review!
Ah, I often wondered what Misaki is like when he's tipsy-not so drunk that he passes out, like he did when Akihiko gave him wine, but when he's out with someone and has had a few drinks. I imagined him to be quite talkative and more honest because of the alcohol, which is basically how you described him here. I was kind of surprised when he told Aikawa not to fangirl over real people, but that's probably also because of the alcohol. It did annoy him when Aikawa fangirled over him and Akihiko in the original series.
Speaking of Akihiko, he is one sly bastard xD If he isn't using Hiroki to give him inspiration for BL novels, Ritsu is his target. Oh man, I'm really curious what he'll think if he finds out what Akihiko has been writing about him and Takano.

Love love LOVE the conversation between Hiroki and Akihiko in this chapter. You write the two of them so well...their history is palpable in every line. Also, yay for misunderstandings being cleared up! I always love seeing a jealous Misaki, especially when it leads to a proactive Misaki. Looking forward to the citrus like the perv I am. :D Cheers!

FINALLY!
THE MISUNDERSTANDING IS CLEARED BY USAGI-SAN!

I LOVE U, MR. RABBIT!

I LOVE HIROKI AND TODOU!

THIS IS SO FAR MY FAV CHAPTER!

Oh, wow! I wasn't expecting this story to take such an angsty turn, but I'm really enjoying it. It was great to see being so honest with Takano about his feeling, even if it came at such a horrible cost. And Usagi! I honestly didn't know whether to wring my hands or start laughing when he included Takano in his latest BL novel. Way to make a tense situation worse, buddy! Seriously though, you are doing an excellent job. I'm so glad you've been working on this story again :)

...another misunderstanding...

OH. MY. GOD ! ! !

The misunderstanding makes me cringes...

...i never thought i would prefer the heartbreaking moment...

Oh Aikawa-san...
Oh Misaki...

Hm, maybe this separation will do them some good, especially on Takano's side. Sure, I was surprised by Ritsu's decision to have a clean break but when you think about it, this relationship has too many cracks and sometimes, time away from each other can actually heal the cracks. I'm just worried about Takano's mindset since I think he will take this harder than Ritsu.

Their last night together made me sad. Takano realizing that if he had taken it slow and pursued Ritsu properly, maybe things would have been different and poor Ritsu. He does love and finally admitted it to Takano but only to break it off.

Can't wait for more!

Well, so much for keeping it 'strictly professional' :P
I'd say the lemon was perhaps a bit on the short side, but on the other hand...if the lemon were longer, 70% of the chapter would be smut xD Not that there's anything wrong with that, but this fic seems more focused on the plot, so maybe it's not very fitting. I honestly don't know what to say about that.
Anyway, thanks for the update!

I'm having such multiple emotions right now. And I'm trying to be calm as i can...

...why suddenly with Heartbreaking chapter ever?

Takano is seriously creeping me out. Haha. His jealousy is really scary! Misaki is confused, Takano is jealous and Ritsu just wants to finish his current project.

It is a unique pairing huh? Akihiko and Ritsu! To be honest, it has been quite some time since I've written fanfiction and I'm still not confident enough to write a JR / Sekaiichi Hatsukoi story and still keep them in character. I love Usagi/Misaki and Takano/Ritsu (Though admittedly I do prefer Sekaiichi Hatsukoi a bit more because I think we can relate to the pairings and their troubles) but I have no idea how to write these two together apart from their relationship as editor / novelist. Even if I write a crossover I'd probably make them very, very good friends and let Takano and Misaki get jealous. Lolol.

Can't wait for more!