This was kind of a fun story and that ending was perfect. Well done.

-fans self- I know this seriously old, but DAMN it was so good. I would've actually loved if you had continued this throughout the mission. Great job!

Oh my god! I really love your story! Hahahaha your writing style is impressive, i like it a lot :)

I was searching for more DGM fics and saw yours and I was like: oooh! I remember this one, i read it not long ago and was posted in AO3!
And then i went to my AO3 account and spent 15 minutes looking for it and couldnt find it and i supposed i read it here and went to the reviews to look for what i commented (which should be along the lines of "let me marry your writing skills") and didnt find the review and a I went all ballistic on myself like: Mine, you sassy bitch, didn't leave a review in the story even when you just loved Kanda (coz I always love Kanda, damn him and his long hair and his cat-like eyes, and his sexy everything for not being mine) and the whole plot...
So... I LOVED IT! I didn't say it back then (even when I was sure I did) so I'm doing it now, cause it was HOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTT (I'm rolling my T's like a purring R), yes hot like fire... Like really hot fire... Okay, I'm starting to sound craaaazy~ so gonna stop typing now, tehehe
More people should plot around Yû's hair, because *sighs in love and forgets what she was gonna say*
Anyway, loveeeeee!

Loved it you should make a sequel

I love when kanda's being a bitch too fangirling so hard right now best first chapter ever!

Write more! Post soon! Ganbatte!

HOT!

Beautiful! simply beautiful! You're amazing

uhuuh...
definetly made an impression...*drolling*
This story was one of the best one-shots I've read so far from dgm...tho I usually prefer long stories...

well some of my thoughts: usually with one-shots I have a few problems like: I miss things like developeing feelings or complications or twists etc... or a lot of them are just starting out of nowhere without anything like introduction...especially the lemon/smut etc types. bang ACTION TIME! something like this...those also have it's good points tho...just after reading those I feel like missing things or don't understand what the hell just happend out of nowhere...so anyway I just want to say that this fiction was well structered,had begining and ending, developeing feelings and well...after reading it I felt satisfied and I didn't have the feeling of 'okay, now what why and how is it happened?'. And also I like your writing style! :) It makes me wanting to read more stories of yours! :)

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i love kanda when he is being a bitch too.

It was seriously one of the best ffs ever. I've read it about 4 times already and I'll do it again and probably not just once. You really should write yullen/arekan more often 3. And, by the way, it was your best yullen so far, I think. I like "Mine" nearly just as much, but it's just hot and this little thingy is really something 3 (and I definitely love Kanda's hair almost as much as Allen does 333)

shower sex3

Omygod this was quite literally the best -man thing I've ever read, like you don't even know girl! I am an absolute sucker for long hair, shower scenes, and Kanda just being an over all sexy dick. Like, this was also the best sex scene I've ever read too, and I'm not just saying that because I love you, I'm saying that because my face lit up, and I actually felt my pulse quicken at parts becauseit was just so perfect and sexy and nothing is better then shower sex scenes! I want you to write a million more Kanda/Allen things, because this was the best. I love you.