Great story. Weird place to end it, though.

Holy shit this is so good! Such and exciting ending tho, yay Tobias will close Tony to his heart forever for taking her home, awww! I love her btw, so cute! And the other part of the fic are so hearttouching! In a sad way but still! I love it!

Great job writing the characters in this story. I love the friendship you built between Tony & Fornell. I can't wait to read the sequel (and hope you pick it back up). :)

I like it :)

Really great story

Why didn’t Ziva (never liked her too over the top) & shepherd get their comeuppance? Why did you leave Tony & Gibbs hanging, tony would’ve understood his friend better.

this is a great story you have marked it as complete but it feels like it needs a couple more chapters before its finish it feels incomplete

i would have prefered if Tony were to stay with Fornell. Because gibbs royally screwed up

Update sssssseeooon

Loved it

A brilliant story.

Sorry. If im Tony, ill use the money i hate to hire an assassin to kill McGee. Ive been reading how they betrayed Tony for weeks now and i hate McGee now. With Ziva, i hate her the first time i read about her character so tgat's final and not gonna change.

And that is where you left it. .. I suppose I'll have to see if I can find a sequel...
I really wanted to see Tobias save the day... I'm not a fan of Gibbs.

PERFECT stanza to end the chapter with.

This is a damn good fic and it hurts that this is just the last chapter. I'd love to read more.