Reviews for On the Hot Line |
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PandaHat97 chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 Oh my 0/0 This was fantastic! So hot! |
OnlyDarknessAwaits1369 chapter 1 . 8/23/2014 :/ That was umm...weird.. Their lines were hot and steamy but the using of the remote was a bit.. umm, how should I say this? Freaky? I dnt know... I just dnt really knw how to describe it. But please dnt take it wrongly, it was good.. Thanks for this, definitely a Like.. :D |
Hazukashit chapter 1 . 1/4/2014 IS2G You're really amazing goddammit I'm reading this early in the morning and it's just amazing. The phone sex, I mean, fuck, I don't know what word should Idescribe it. |
InsaneMudkip chapter 1 . 11/11/2013 Usually I hate song fics but this, I really liked this one. Make another :D |
kyuumihaira chapter 1 . 9/9/2013 Hott! *drools and faints* |
bubble-chan93 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013 Ichigo you have soiled your remote. And Grimm you just awesome! |
Akimi Youngblood chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 My favorite paring and one of my favorite songs all rolled up into one. I was singing to myself while reading the entire time lol |
Magi Aladdin chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 I had to put my phone down a couple times before i could finish this lol |
Patd06 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 OMG, I love this song like so much, you have no idea! XD *blushes* sorry, fangirl moment...this was soooo hot! And like I said, I love this song; like when I saw the title, I immediately started singing out loud like a moron...great story:) |
Voluptuous chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 That was so good! your really good at writing sex! I want to read more. :P And i was actually laughing at the remote part... :PI found it really funny for some reason. Thanks! |
Missy QueenBee chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 That was sexy. I liked it, awesome for a one shot! |