at first I didn't get the diabetes but then I realized how sweet it was

According to Makarov, everything Natsu touches is expensive.

Natsu is the overprotective dad every girl looks up to but hates at the same time

The best narza story, I have seen so far

This ending is awesome! Definitely the definitive ending between the two, and the most believable.

If I could compare this, it's like when "I am legend" first came out, and everyone thought the ending was trash. But then a new ending was made because the people asked for it and it became the fan favorite and the canon ending. I don't know why, but I thought of this automatically once I got half way through the chapter since this was 100 times better than the first ending.

Anyways, good job on this fic! It was short, but sweet. Like a strawberry shortcake~... Thanks for satiating my thirst for NaZa :)!

Oh gajeel *shakes head*

Fight me that's what Gajeel! That and we're not mages we're wizards!

I don't really like strawberries but if it's from Erza or Wendy and they're the one feeding me I'll take it!

So Natsu's a lolicon? I love the story but kinda made him seem like a closet lolicon with having his feelings come out when she turned into a little girl. Lol

Oooh yes! I loved this story so much, you did a great job!

Hi

This is what I think of chapter 10, 11, 12, and 13.

The overall characterization, interaction and dialog of the characters, namely Natu and Erza are good. I do think some areas need to be fleshed out better, but I congratulate you on simple detail: their relationship. It was great how they fall in love and confess their feelings, but are aware that Ezra’s regression is a complication and decide to do the hardest but most reasonable thing: wait for Ezra to become older.

Your two endings (One where Ezra regains her age and another has to grow up all over again) are good.

The wholesome standards are high except for a few vulgar words. Other themes are handled right.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless

Data Seeker

Hi

This is what I think of chapter 6, 7, 8 and 9.

The basic continuation of the story and the characterization of the characters is good. There are some moments that are cute and humorous. I do think some areas need fine tuning.

The wholesome standards are high except for a few uncalled swear words. I didn’t like the reference to a girl in a bikini. Granted, you didn’t make it suggestive, but I am still concerned.

I hope you like this review. God bless

Data Seeker

Hi

I don’t watch Fairy Tale, but your story interests me. I have fixation with Age Regression, though there are there things I think the plot needs.

1, the character should be a girl. Nothing against boys, I just prefer girls.

2, no memory loss. Call it a preference.

3, nothing sexualized. Sex should never be treated as a cheap thrill.

Anyway, this review generalizes my view of chapter 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5.

The basic plot is good. I like the idea of this strong attractive woman getting turned into a child. As I mentioned, I like that there is no memory loss.

I don’t know the characters well, but for the most part they seem good.

It’s interesting how while Erza has her memories, she has childish compulsions and in some cases isn’t embarrassed by her plight, her behavior or how her friends sometimes treat her.

I do think some of the writing, details and story structure needs worth though.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean except for uncalled swearing in chapter 2 and 4.
Nothing is suggestively offensive- THANK YOU.

And that mature reference was fine.

I’ll send more reviews later. God bless

Data Seeker

I like it

Hey it's me again I swear that ending almost killed me WHY HIRO!WHY!