wow hands down one of the bet one shots I've ever read.

Woah. That's... Intense. I like it!

WOW, excellent story! Very well done. It's a very interesting and moreno mature spin-off of the original story line.

Wow, this is some really good writing! You were very vivid and it was really easy to picture everything as I read. I also loved the chemistry between Robin and Starfire!

Another thing I like about this is that it's a stand alone story, but the way you've left things makes it seem like it could become a really amazing chapter story. You have it right in that middle ground, and I for one wouldn't mind you making it a fullblown story. Thanks for writing this!

You're friggin' awesome! I bow to your awesomeness!

That was extremely well written. You used some really vivid, innovative descriptions that added a whole new layer to the story itself. Truly very well done, complete with a satisfying ending. Bravo. I think you're a new favorite.

good job

Good Start, interesting A.U. wonder if the other Titans will enter into it at all. Write On!