Reviews for A rainy day
Monica Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
Awww! That was sweet. This was a very engaging and well-written story. I quite enjoyed it. And it brought a smile to my face too. You should be more confident about your writings skills. It was good! Thank you for the read. :)
Wumbo-Girl 1314 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Aww- this is so cute! Poor Luke. I love how you portrayed their friendship- so sweet and true to canon! You are a genius. :D
ElJadius chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Aww this was really cute. I love Luke so much and you've portrayed his character really well ;)

The way he stayed up though... It's the sort of thing I'd do lol
Annomynous chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
This is your first ever story on FanFiction?! Dude! Your writing is amazing! Your characterizations are spot on, and I just felt submerged into the story. You did a wonderful job! Now if you excuse me, I'm going to your profile to see if you have uploaded any other stories since 2013. (2013?! Man I should've been reading fan fictions sooner...)

Keep up the good work!
Phanstarlight chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
AWWWW! That was so cute :3
skrewtkeeper chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Holy crap, is this your first ever fan-fiction? *applauds* Well done. My first was utter crap. :D

This was charming and I think I know the picture it was inspired from, which of course makes it even more special. Thank you for posting. I've been looking all over this site for a good depiction of the friendship the professor and Luke share and this fit the bill superbly. I can finally go to sleep now since it cheered me up so much. Thanks again. ;)

Skrewtkeeper
ARandomCommenter chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
It’s late, I have a big day tomorrow, and I ought to be asleep. Instead I’m pouring over this story, grinning like an idiot, and audibly squealing at every line of dialog. Though admittedly I thought the answer to the riddle at the end was a reflection. You know, since they’re so commonly referred to as pools. But hey, it could work. And I’ll you know I take puddles on a regular basis. I scoop ‘em up as I walk by, and they’re never seen again. Notice how they’re all gone the next day? Yeah. I rest my case.

…See what I mean? Sleep. I need it.

Anyway, jokes aside, you should be very proud of your writing. It’s vivid and witty, the characters and dialog are spot on, and the heart of your stories come though wonderfully. I read your other short story as well, and all I can say is thank you; I really hope there are even more of your incredible stories to come.
LuxMentis chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I think I got a glimpse of the fanart you were mentioning, and I really loved it, too.
I've always thought rain to be fascinating, especially those rainy days when everything kind of changes its colour, but, just like you, I tend to get a little more sleepy when it's one of those days. And you managed to describe it very well, both the atmosphere and the feeling. Loved it.
I hope to read more than this, you sure are talented :)
Love, Funnystar-/\-
buslimpan chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Aw, Luke! Staying up all night to solve a puzzle! I know how it feels.
The story was wonderful! It was cute and gave off a warm feeling! Loved how Luke reacted when he solved the puzzle!