Reviews for Greetings Pumpkin |
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PlatypusPetals chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 *Being the tiny little boy I am, Grabs Edds ear and yells* You Best NoT HurT MaH BahBehy! *Hits him with a chancla* |
LW12 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Very good |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Okay, I love the ship and you had a wonderful idea! But, the writing is just...bad. Your sentences run together and make it hard to read, there is little to no punctuation, it doesn't flow as a story very well, and some of the words (like sense instead of since) need to be fixed. I would suggest heavy editing, not trying to be rude if it sounds like I am. Just pointing something's out. |
jizismyname chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 im hornier than a preist in a daycare keep it up! |
MidnightLuve chapter 1 . 2/27/2014 that was hot |
Tsuyoshi-chin chapter 1 . 10/17/2013 Daaaaaaaang R!Edd is so sexy that it almost makes me cry! |
Enumi chapter 1 . 6/28/2013 Love revedd histories, and this is not the exception, keep on it I'll be waiting for charp 2! :) |
12yaoihoney chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 Omg dat waz hawt az hell *glomp* i have the widest and most perverse smile on face right now! Phew damn i need a shower just from reading this lol reverse kevedd or can u make a regular kevedd smut please |
kaci12 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013 Holy shit girl 0.o THIS WAS AWESOME! You should write more like this :) |
Evil Edd chapter 1 . 5/30/2013 Good :3 loves. you just need to work on your name placement. |