Reviews for The Wandering Smith |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh please oh please oh please make a sequel :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the idea you crafter here, and your characterization was spot-on, but the execution felt a bit too hasty. For example, skipping so suddenly from Bilbo and Thorin meeting to a scene where they've obviously been involved for quite sometime is rather jarring to the flow of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so much potential here! Hope you'll keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic! Are you ever going to continue this wonderful story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome one shot here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only wish is that it was longer |
![]() ![]() Cute ending, but. . . NOOOOOOO THORIN'S MAJESTIC, SUPER, AWESOME, BEARD, OF AWSOMENESS *sob* |
![]() ![]() ![]() original story can't wait to see next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() love it write more please |
![]() ![]() Well, that's a good story. Or at least a good start. It would be brilliant if you could write a sequel. anyway good work Bonne journée |